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Matvey010408

Oct. 14, 2024

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It's about what I like

I like, when it snows or rains outside, when the weather is gloomy and I stay at home and just relax. I like thunderstorm.
I can’t live without any activities for a long time, but I don’t understand people, who work so hard without chilling.
I like reading books, but only with deep idea within. I like sport in any sides, let it be basketball or swimming. I like sculpting something, most of all different famous people with interesting life history, but I can’t sculpt, if I don’t know this person. I like playing soldiers, I have more, then one thousand soldiers from different periods: Ancient Rome and Greece, Middle Ages and Napoleonic Wars. I really like history of Japan, China, Korea and all other Orient countries. I like learning culture of my Fatherland and combine it with some other cultures in my mind. It helps to understand the difference in mindset between us and others.
I like charming, breath-taking nature views. It transforms my mind, deletes all waste thoughts and unclear things out of my head and shows, how is deep the beauty of our world.
I like writing some fantastic stories and historical articles. I like collect coins, postage stamps, books, minifigures, auto models and many other things. For all my hobbies I have no words, which I know on English.
Please, write something about my language level. Thank you!


Мне нравится, когда на улице идет снег или дождь, когда погода мрачная, а я остаюсь дома и просто расслабляюсь. Мне нравится гроза.
Я не могу долго жить без каких-либо занятий, но я не понимаю людей, которые так усердно работают, не расслабляясь.
Мне нравится читать книги, но только с глубокой идеей внутри. Мне нравится спорт в любых проявлениях, пусть это будет баскетбол или плавание. Мне нравится что-то лепить, больше всего разных известных людей с интересной историей жизни, но я не могу лепить, если не знаю этого человека. Мне нравится играть в солдатики, у меня больше тысячи солдат из разных периодов: Древнего Рима и Греции, средних веков и наполеоновских войн. Мне действительно нравится история Японии, Китая, Кореи и всех других стран Востока. Мне нравится изучать культуру моей Родины и мысленно сочетать ее с некоторыми другими культурами. Это помогает понять разницу в мышлении между нами и другими.
Мне нравятся очаровательные, захватывающие дух виды природы. Это преображает мой разум, удаляет все ненужные мысли и неясные вещи из моей головы и показывает, насколько глубока красота нашего мира.
Мне нравится писать фантастические рассказы и исторические статьи. Мне нравится коллекционировать монеты, почтовые марки, книги, минифигурки, модели автомобилей и многое другое. Для всех моих увлечений у меня нет слов, которые я знаю на английском.
Пожалуйста, напишите что-нибудь о моем уровне владения языком. Спасибо!

Corrections

I like, when it snows or rains outside, or when the weather is gloomy and I stay at home and just relax.

I like thunderstorms.

I can’t live without any activities for a long time, but I don’t understand people, who work so hard without chillrelaxing.

"Chilling" isn't techinally wrong, it just feels awkward here.

I like reading books, but only ones with deep idea withins.

"Within" is implied.

I like sport in any sides, let it be basketball or swimming.

I like any kind of sport, such as basketball or swimming.

I like sculpting something, most of all different famous people with interesting life historyies, but I can’t sculpt, if I don’t know this person.

I like playing soldiers, I have more, then one thousand soldiers from different periods: Ancient Rome and Greece, Middle Ages and Napoleonic Wars.

I really like history of Japan, China, Korea and all other OrientAsian countries.

It helps to understand the difference in mindset between us and others.

I like charming, breath-taking nature views.

It transforms my mind, deletes all waste thoughts and unclear things out of my head and shows, how is deep the beauty of our world is.

I like writing some fantasticy stories and historical articles.

I like to collect coins, postage stamps, books, minifigures, auto modelsmodel cars, and many other things.

For all my hobbies I have no words, which that I know oin English.

Feedback

Amazing work! Definitely a strong A2 to B1 at a minimum, possibly higher with some slight corrections!

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Matvey010408

Oct. 15, 2024

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Thank you for your feedback! I need such detailed corrections to make my writing skills in English much better.

I can’t live without any activities for a long time, but I don’t understand people, who work so hard without chilling.


I can’t live without any activities for a long time, but I don’t understand people, who work so hard without chillrelaxing.

"Chilling" isn't techinally wrong, it just feels awkward here.

I like reading books, but only with deep idea within.


I like reading books, but only ones with deep idea withins.

"Within" is implied.

I like sport in any sides, let it be basketball or swimming.


I like sport in any sides, let it be basketball or swimming.

I like any kind of sport, such as basketball or swimming.

I like sculpting something, most of all different famous people with interesting life history, but I can’t sculpt, if I don’t know this person.


I like sculpting something, most of all different famous people with interesting life historyies, but I can’t sculpt, if I don’t know this person.

I like playing soldiers, I have more, then one thousand soldiers from different periods: Ancient Rome and Greece, Middle Ages and Napoleonic Wars.


I like playing soldiers, I have more, then one thousand soldiers from different periods: Ancient Rome and Greece, Middle Ages and Napoleonic Wars.

I really like history of Japan, China, Korea and all other Orient countries.


I really like history of Japan, China, Korea and all other OrientAsian countries.

I like learning culture of my Fatherland and combine it with some other cultures in my mind.


It helps to understand the difference in mindset between us and others.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like charming, breath-taking nature views.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It transforms my mind, deletes all waste thoughts and unclear things out of my head and shows, how is deep the beauty of our world.


It transforms my mind, deletes all waste thoughts and unclear things out of my head and shows, how is deep the beauty of our world is.

I like writing some fantastic stories and historical articles.


I like writing some fantasticy stories and historical articles.

It's about what I like


I like, when it snows or rains outside, when the weather is gloomy and I stay at home and just relax.


I like, when it snows or rains outside, or when the weather is gloomy and I stay at home and just relax.

I like thunderstorm.


I like thunderstorms.

Thank you!


I like collect coins, postage stamps, books, minifigures, auto models and many other things.


I like to collect coins, postage stamps, books, minifigures, auto modelsmodel cars, and many other things.

For all my hobbies I have no words, which I know on English.


For all my hobbies I have no words, which that I know oin English.

Please, write something about my language level.


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