Jan. 12, 2025
Items around me and their colors
Around me there is a gray notebook, a microphone with RGB colors (red, green, and blue), a brown desk, a black chair, and a white bookshelf.
Ao meu redor tem um notebook cinza, um microfone com cores RGB (vermelho, verde e azul), uma mesa marrom, uma cadeira preta e uma estante de livros branca.
Around me there is a gray notebook, a microphone with (RGB/multiple) colors (red, green, and blue), a brown desk, a black chair, and a white bookshelf.
Using RGB in this way is a very gamer specific usage - maybe the microphone is from a gaming brand and has primary red green and blue and this is appropriate, but this will sound weird to people who don't talk about gaming hardware.
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Perfect, possibly one change to word choice depending on target audience.
Jan. 13, 2025
thank you :)
Items around me and their colors
Around me there is a gray notebook, a microphone with RGB colors (red, green, and blue), a brown desk, a black chair, and a white bookshelf.
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Around me there is a gray notebook, a microphone with RGB colors (red, green, and blue), a brown desk, a black chair, and a white bookshelf. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Around me there is a gray notebook, a microphone with (RGB/multiple) colors (red, green, and blue), a brown desk, a black chair, and a white bookshelf. Using RGB in this way is a very gamer specific usage - maybe the microphone is from a gaming brand and has primary red green and blue and this is appropriate, but this will sound weird to people who don't talk about gaming hardware. |
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