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kiwy

Oct. 9, 2021

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It Is Raining

I finished my last entry at midnight, because I thought I had no lesson in the morning. Because of the national break, we have to work this Saturday. I hate the rearragement (调休) of any festivals, because it disturb all the normal life. When I was taking shower, I suddenly realised that I had a morning reading class at seven twenty, my mood went down sharply.
When I stood in the classroom, I was very sleepy.
It is raining all day because there are two typhoons passing by. It is so cool that I have to put on a jacket. I like the cool weather, though raining all day is quite unconvenience. I can get up late womorrow, but I have to work at night. What a short weekend.

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It Is Raining

I finished my last entry at midnight, because I thought I had no lessons in the morning.

Because part of the national break fell on the weekend, we have to work this Saturday.

I hate twhe rearragement (调休) of any festivaln this happens, because it disturb all therupts my normal lifschedule.

When I was taking shower, I suddenly realised that I had a morning reading class at seven twenty, and my mood went down sharplyimmediately soured.

When I stood in the classroomwas teaching, I was very sleepy.

It is raining all day because there are two typhoons passing by.

It is so coold that I have to put on a jacket.

Things can be "so warm" but not really "so cool" maybe because of it's other association (酷)

I like the cool weather, though the fact that it's raining all day is quite uinconveniencet.

I can get up late wtomorrow, but I have to work at night.

What a short weekend.

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kiwy

Oct. 10, 2021

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When I stood in the classroomwas teaching, I was very sleepy.

We have moining reading and night reading, both of them are 30 minutes, where the teachers don't need to teach anything but help with the principles.

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sivanc

Oct. 10, 2021

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We have moining reading and night reading, both of them are 30 minutes, where the teachers don't need to teach anything but help with the principles.

Yeah, I'd still call it teaching though.

I hate the rearragement (调休) of any festivals, because it disturb all thes normal life.

When I was taking a shower, I suddenly realised that I had a morning reading class at seven twenty, and my mood went down sharply.

I like the cool weather, though raining all day is quite uinconveniencet.

I can get up late wtomorrow, but I have to work at night.

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kiwy

Oct. 10, 2021

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Thank you!

It Is Raining


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I finished my last entry at midnight, because I thought I had no lesson in the morning.


I finished my last entry at midnight, because I thought I had no lessons in the morning.

Because of the national break, we have to work this Saturday.


Because part of the national break fell on the weekend, we have to work this Saturday.

I hate the rearragement (调休) of any festivals, because it disturb all the normal life.


I hate the rearragement (调休) of any festivals, because it disturb all thes normal life.

I hate twhe rearragement (调休) of any festivaln this happens, because it disturb all therupts my normal lifschedule.

When I was taking shower, I suddenly realised that I had a morning reading class at seven twenty, my mood went down sharply.


When I was taking a shower, I suddenly realised that I had a morning reading class at seven twenty, and my mood went down sharply.

When I was taking shower, I suddenly realised that I had a morning reading class at seven twenty, and my mood went down sharplyimmediately soured.

When I stood in the classroom, I was very sleepy.


When I stood in the classroomwas teaching, I was very sleepy.

It is raining all day because there are two typhoons passing by.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is so cool that I have to put on a jacket.


It is so coold that I have to put on a jacket.

Things can be "so warm" but not really "so cool" maybe because of it's other association (酷)

I like the cool weather, though raining all day is quite unconvenience.


I like the cool weather, though raining all day is quite uinconveniencet.

I like the cool weather, though the fact that it's raining all day is quite uinconveniencet.

I can get up late womorrow, but I have to work at night.


I can get up late wtomorrow, but I have to work at night.

I can get up late wtomorrow, but I have to work at night.

What a short weekend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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