Sept. 28, 2020
It is evening now.
It is evening now. I went for a walk and have just returned. It was cloudy today, but I like such weather. My day was really productive. I read a long passage from a German book und spook around 17 minutes about this passage in German. Then I wrote a short entry in German and watched a few videos. Then I went for a walk. Now I want to practice my English. I want to write a short entry in English. Almost nothing is happening in my life, but I don’t complain. Several years ago I was overwhelmed by everything happening in my life. Now I want to live a simple life. I am working now on improving my German, because I want to have a job, which has to do with German. I want to work from home. In few months I’m going to start my job search. Hopefully I will find one, which suits me. If I found a remote job, I would move to my hometown. I used to live there when I was a child. The town is very small and cozy and it is situated not so far from the village, where my grandmother lived. I also lived there and went to school. It would be amazing, if I had possibility to visit this village every weekend. I would live in the small town and visit village every time when I have day off.
It is evening now.
It is evening now.
I went for a walk and have just returned.
It was cloudy today, but I like suchthis kind of weather.
A little more natural. "such weather" is also perfectly fine.
My day was really productive.
I read a long passage from a German book uand spooke around 17 minutes about this passage in German.
Then I wrote a short entry in German and watched a few videos.
Then I went for a walk.
Now I want to practice my English.
I want to write a short entry in English.
Almost nothing is happening in my life, but I dwon’'t complain.
Several years ago, I was overwhelmed by everything happening in my life.
Now I want to live a simple life.
I am now working now on improving my German, because I want to have a job, which has to do withrequires German.
I want to work from home.
In a few months, I’m going to start my job search.
Hopefully I will find one, which that suits me.
"which" is okay, but "that" sounds more natural.
If I found a remote job, I would move to my hometown.
I used to live there when I was a child.
The town is very small and cozy and it is situated not so far from the village, where my grandmother lived.
I also lived there and went to school.
It would be amazing, if I had the possibility to visit this village every weekend.
I would live in the small town and visit the village every time whenever I have a day off.
Sept. 29, 2020
Thank you very much!
It is evening now.
It is evening now.
I went for a walk and have just returned.
It was cloudy today, but I like such weather.
My day was really productive.
I read a long passage from a German book uand spook around 17 minutes about this passage in Germanke in German about it for around 17 minutes.
Then I wrote a short entry in German and watched a few videos.
Then I went for a walk.
Now I want to practice my English.
I want to write a short entry in English.
Almost nothing is happening in my life, but I don’t complain.
Several years ago I was overwhelmed by everything happening in my life.
Now I want to live a simple life.
I am working now on improving my German, because I want to have a job, which that has to do with German.
Or "that uses German"
I want to work from home.
In few months I’m going to start my job search.
Hopefully I will find one, which that suits me.
If I found a remote job, I would move to my hometown.
I used to live there when I was a child.
The town is very small and cozy and it is situated not so far from the village, where my grandmother lived.
I also lived there and went to school there.
It would be amazing, if I had possibilitywas able to visit this village every weekend.
I would live in the small town and visit the village every time when I haved a day off.
Feedback
Good writing! Good luck with the job search!
Sept. 29, 2020
Thank you very much!
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