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kaja1656

July 18, 2023

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It is as it is

Today's day was really hard for me. Last month I finished medical school. In Poland we have to wait three months to start a new job that our country gives us - internship. So I'm broke and I have no job. Summer holidays without money sucks. I live with my mom and I have arguments with her almost everyday. I cut off my friends because I feel as a burden for them and I don't really now what to do. I'm looking for any job to occupy my mind with anything. I'm afraid I'm gonna be lonely forever. No friends, no boyfriend, even no cat.


Dzisiejszy dzień był bardzo ciężki dla mnie. W zeszłym miesiącu skończyłam studia medyczne. W Polsce musimy czekać do rozpoczęcia nowej pracy zapewnianej przez państwo - stażu. Więc jestem spłukana i nie mam żadnej pracy. Wakacje bez pieniędzy są słabe. Mieszkam z mamą, z którą kłócę się prawie codziennie. Odcięłam się od przyjaciół bo czuję, że jestem dla nich ciężarem i nie wiem na prawdę co dalej robić. Szukam jakiejkolwiek pracy żeby zająć czymkolwiek myśli. Boję się, że już zawsze będę samotna. Bez przyjaciół, bez chłopaka, nawet bez kota.

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It is aswhat it is

Today's day was really hard for me.

In Poland we have to wait three months to start a new job that our country gives us -, which is only internship.

I added only here, but I’m not sure if that is what you are looking for.

So I'm broke, and I have no job.

Summer holidaysbreak without money sucks.

I changed this to the more American sounding Summer break, because this sentence sounds awkward to me. I’m not sure if how you wrote it is actually incorrect, or if it’s just British English.

There was another commenter that said to make “suck” without the extra “s” to match “holidays.” I think that “Summer holidays” might be a collective noun in British/Australian English, so “sucks” might be correct? I’m not really sure on that, though.


I live with my mom, and I havwe argumentse with each other almost everyday.

I cut off my friends because I feel aslike a burden forto them, and I don't really know what to do.

I'm looking for any job to occupy my mind with anything.

No friends, no boyfriend, not even noa cat.

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I’m unsure if you are telling a story, or if this is your situation right now, but I’m sending virtual hugs.

It is aswhat it is

Today's day was really hard for me.

Last month, I finished medical school.

In Poland, we have to wait three months to start a new job that our country gives us -, which is an internship.

Summer holidays without money sucks.

"Sucks" needs to agree with the plurality of the noun "holidays."

I live with my mom, and I havwe arguments with here almost everyday.

Needs a comma to connect independent clauses connected by "and."

I cut off my friends because I feel aslike a burden forto them, and I don't really know what to do.

No friends, no boyfriend, not even noa cat.

It is as it is


It is aswhat it is

It is aswhat it is

Today's day was really hard for me.


Today's day was really hard for me.

Today's day was really hard for me.

Last month I finished medical school.


Last month, I finished medical school.

In Poland we have to wait three months to start a new job that ourcountry gives us - internship.


So I'm broke and I have no job.


So I'm broke, and I have no job.

Summer holidays without money sucks.


Summer holidays without money sucks.

"Sucks" needs to agree with the plurality of the noun "holidays."

Summer holidaysbreak without money sucks.

I changed this to the more American sounding Summer break, because this sentence sounds awkward to me. I’m not sure if how you wrote it is actually incorrect, or if it’s just British English. There was another commenter that said to make “suck” without the extra “s” to match “holidays.” I think that “Summer holidays” might be a collective noun in British/Australian English, so “sucks” might be correct? I’m not really sure on that, though.

I live with my mom and I have arguments with her almost everyday.


I live with my mom, and I havwe arguments with here almost everyday.

Needs a comma to connect independent clauses connected by "and."

I live with my mom, and I havwe argumentse with each other almost everyday.

I cut off my friends because I feel as a burden for them and I don't really now what to do.


I cut off my friends because I feel aslike a burden forto them, and I don't really know what to do.

I cut off my friends because I feel aslike a burden forto them, and I don't really know what to do.

I'm looking for any job to occupy my mind with anything.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm afraid I'm gonna be lonely forever.


No friends, no boyfriend, even no cat.


No friends, no boyfriend, not even noa cat.

No friends, no boyfriend, not even noa cat.

In Poland we have to wait three months to start a new job that our country gives us - internship.


In Poland, we have to wait three months to start a new job that our country gives us -, which is an internship.

In Poland we have to wait three months to start a new job that our country gives us -, which is only internship.

I added only here, but I’m not sure if that is what you are looking for.

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