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Being honest, it depends on the day and the occasion.
If I truly need to be woken up and feel energized during the day I drink coffee. If I need to feel satisfied until the lunch or not be hungry fast I drink milk. If I want to spend time with my gradmonther I might drink tea, the reason is because she likes to prepare things to our family, so we have a "ritual" I stay in the kitchen whatching her prepare the tea while we talk about something that happened latelly, if we slept well or tell what we have dreamed.
Sendo sincera, depende do dia e da ocasião.
Se eu realmente quero ser acordada e me sentir energizada durante o dia eu bebo café. Se eu preciso sentir satisfeita durante o almoço ou não sentir faminta rápido eu bebo leite. Se eu quero passar mais tempo com a minha avó eu devo beber chá, o motivo é porque ela gosta de preparar coisas pra nossa família. Então nós temos um "ritual". Eu fico na cozinha vendo ela preparar o chá enquanto nós conversamos sobre algo que aconteceu recentemente, se nós dormimos bem ou contamos o que nós sonhamos.
If I truly need to be woken up and feel energized during the day I drink coffee.
Your sentence is perfectly correct, but can I suggest "If I really need a pick-me-up..." so that it sounds a bit more idiomatic?
If I need to feel satisfiedfull until the lunch or not be hungry fast I drink milk.
"Until the lunch" would refer to a specific lunch or a lunch party. In this case, just saying "until lunch" for lunch in general would make more sense.
If I want to spend time with my grandmonther, I might drink tea, t. The reason is because she likes to prepare things tofor our family, so we have a "ritual" where I stay in the kitchen whatching her prepare the tea while we talk about something that happened latelrecently, if we slept well or tellalk about what we have dreamed about.
I broke this sentence up a little to help it from running on too long.
You could use "in which" instead of "where" in the phrase "we have a ritual [where/in which] I stay in the kitchen watching her prepare the tea..." -- the choice is yours, but you do need one or the other.
Very good writing, though - a few very minor errors, but very natural, flowing prose that is completely easy to understand.
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You have a truly excellent grasp of English. Congratulations! All the corrections I made were very specific, tended to be very idiomatic, and nothing stood out as a pattern. Keep practicing, but know that your English is very strong!
It depends on the day
Being honest, it depends on the day and the occasion.
If I truly need to be woken up and feel energized during the day, I drink coffee.
If I need to feel satisfied until the lunch or not be hungry fast, I drink milk.
If I want to spend time with my grandmonther, I might drink tea, t. The reason is because she likes to prepare things tofor our family, so we have a "ritual." I stay in the kitchen whatching her prepare the tea while we talk about something that happened latelly, if we slept well, or tellalk about what we have dreamed.
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Being honest, it depends on the day and the occasion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
If I truly need to be woken up and feel energized during the day I drink coffee. If I truly need to be woken up and feel energized during the day, I drink coffee. If I truly need to be woken up and feel energized during the day I drink coffee. Your sentence is perfectly correct, but can I suggest "If I really need a pick-me-up..." so that it sounds a bit more idiomatic? |
If I need to feel satisfied until the lunch or not be hungry fast I drink milk. If I need to feel satisfied until If I need to feel "Until the lunch" would refer to a specific lunch or a lunch party. In this case, just saying "until lunch" for lunch in general would make more sense. |
If I want to spend time with my gradmonther I might drink tea, the reason is because she likes to prepare things to our family, so we have a "ritual" I stay in the kitchen whatching her prepare the tea while we talk about something that happened latelly, if we slept well or tell what we have dreamed. If I want to spend time with my grandmo If I want to spend time with my grandmo I broke this sentence up a little to help it from running on too long. You could use "in which" instead of "where" in the phrase "we have a ritual [where/in which] I stay in the kitchen watching her prepare the tea..." -- the choice is yours, but you do need one or the other. Very good writing, though - a few very minor errors, but very natural, flowing prose that is completely easy to understand. |
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