Sept. 29, 2020
It Becomes Autumn
In my town, which places in the northeast area of Japan, it becomes cold, and the days become short these days. Riding a motorcycle, I feel chilly even I wear warm clothes. However, I like this season, autumn and winter, because I think these are more sentimental seasons than others. Especially, I like to drink something hot with my friends and talk with them. The rest of 2020 is only 3 months! I wish the next 3 months will be good days for me.
It Becomes Autumn
In my town, which placeis in the northeast area ofern Japan, it is becomesing cold, and the days becomare short these daysening.
Riding a motorcycle, I feel chilly even when I wear warm clothes.
However, I like this season, autumn and winter, because I think thesey are more sentimental seasons than others.
EI especially, I like to drink something hot with my friends and talk with them.
Another way to write it: "I especially enjoy talking with friends over a hot drink."
The rest of 2020 is are only 3three months left in 2020!
Or: "2020 only has three months left!"
Or: "2020 will be over in only 3 months!"
I wish for the next 3three months willto be a good daystime for me.
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In my town, which places in the northeast area of Japan, it becomes cold, and the days become short these days. In my town, which |
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Riding a motorcycle, I feel chilly even I wear warm clothes. Riding a motorcycle, I feel chilly even when I wear warm clothes. |
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However, I like this season, autumn and winter, because I think these are more sentimental seasons than others. However, I like |
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Especially, I like to drink something hot with my friends and talk with them.
Another way to write it: "I especially enjoy talking with friends over a hot drink." |
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The rest of 2020 is only 3 months! The Or: "2020 only has three months left!" Or: "2020 will be over in only 3 months!" |
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I wish the next 3 months will be good days for me. I wish for the next |
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