Nov. 29, 2024
IT
IT, it's a trendy word, but more than that is a Revolution that happed a around 30 years ago. Before, tecnology was used but not with the porpotions that we see in nows days. Some people have scare about, other think that is a way to put humans beans like God. I think we have to be careful, because tecnology bring us good things, but if we use it badly we can have problems. We need to use the IT for a good of all, to make a world a better, with justice and equality for everyone. And we have a power, because tecnology bring a facility to help in any part of the globe people who live wurts than us. Because in nows days we can see in live, all the happens around the world. we can give our work or our Money to help projects that will do the difference for people that suffer or have less than us. We have a right that don't look for the other side, we need to go in front, see the problems and with the resurces that we have, I say IT, use it for better of all people and planet.
‘IT, it'’. It is a trendy word, but more than that is. More importantly, this word became part of a Revolution that happed aoccurred around 30thirty years ago.
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Some people have scare about, other think that is a way to put humans beans like God.
I’m not sure what you are trying to say here.
I think we have to be careful, becausehuman society should be careful regarding their relationship with technology bring us. Technology can be used for many good things, but if wt can be used it badly we can have problemsn negative ways as well.
We need to use the IT for a good of all,word, ‘IT’, in a positive way. It will help to make athe world a better place, with justice and equality for everyone.
And we have a power, because tecnology bring a facility to help in any part of the globe people who live wurts than uTechnology is powerful as it has the ability to aid people across the globe. It can even aid impoverished countries.
Because in nows Nowadays, we can see in live, all the happens around the world.everything that occurs around the world through a technological screen.
we can give our work or our Money to help projects that will do the difference for people that suffer or have less than us.Additionally, technology can easily allow people to aid others themselves. For example, social media can notify people of a worthy cause to donate to. They can help people who are suffering worse than them.
We have a right that don't look for the other side, we need to go in front, see the problems and with the resurces that we have, I say IT, use it for better of all people and planet.
It is important to use technology for positive reasons only. Use ‘IT’ for the benefit of all beings on the planet.
Feedback
I commend you for giving your best shot at writing a mini essay!
There are a lot of errors that I found throughout each sentence. I’m not entirely sure what you mean by ‘IT’. Do you mean, ‘information technology’?. If so, that will need to be explained. Also, each sentence seems to divert in topics a bit. Make sure you have a clear focus on what you are trying to say.
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IT, it's a trendy word, but more than that is a Revolution that happed a around 30 years ago. ‘IT |
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Before, tecnology was used but not with the porpotions that we see in nows days.
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Some people have scare about, other think that is a way to put humans beans like God.
I’m not sure what you are trying to say here. |
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I think we have to be careful, because tecnology bring us good things, but if we use it badly we can have problems. I think |
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We need to use the IT for a good of all, to make a world a better, with justice and equality for everyone. We need to use the |
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And we have a power, because tecnology bring a facility to help in any part of the globe people who live wurts than us.
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Because in nows days we can see in live, all the happens around the world.
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we can give our work or our Money to help projects that will do the difference for people that suffer or have less than us.
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We have a right that don't look for the other side, we need to go in front, see the problems and with the resurces that we have, I say IT, use it for better of all people and planet. We have a right that don't look for the other side, we need to go in front, see the problems and with the resurces that we have, I say IT, use it for better of all people and planet. It is important to use technology for positive reasons only. Use ‘IT’ for the benefit of all beings on the planet. |
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