So I dumped for a whilestayed put for a little while (until it was safe to continue my drive). So I stayed put for a little while (until it was safe to continue my drive).

(I wrote this because I assume you pulled aside and waited for the rude driver to pass before continuing your commute.)

So I dumstopped? for a while. So I stopped? for a while.

Do you mean you stopped for a while?

So I dumstopped for a while. So I stopped for a while.

At dusk, iIt wasn't very hot at dusk. It wasn't very hot at dusk.

At dusk, it wasn't very hot. At dusk, it wasn't very hot

Sso I decided to go for a ride. so I decided to go for a ride.

This is the same thought and can be put in one sentence.

I wanted to go to visit two aunts who live nearby. I wanted to go visit two aunts who live nearby.

I wanted to go to visit two aunts who live nearby. I wanted to go visit two aunts who live nearby.

You don't need to twice.

I wanted to go to visit two aunts who live nearby. I wanted to visit two aunts who live nearby.

I went to visited them in April. I went to visit them in April.

I had visited them in April. I had visited them in April.

It costtook me half an hour one way. It took me half an hour one way.

It cost metook a half an hour one way to get there. It took a half an hour one way to get there.

Usually cost only refers to money.

It costtook me half an hour one wayto get there. It took me half an hour to get there.

The major road is being rebuildingt. The major road is being rebuilt.

The majorin road is being rebuilding.t The main road is being rebuilt

The major road is rebuildingy are rebuilding a major road. They are rebuilding a major road.

So it is very uinconvienient. So it is very inconvenient.

So it is very uinconvienient. So it is very inconvenient.

So it is very unconveinient. to travel there. So it is very unconveinient to travel there.

Can be made into one sentence, remove period beforehand and replace with lowercase s.

Whilen I was dridving, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down. While I was driving, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down.

Or if you were riding a bike: "While I was riding my bike,..."

Whilen I was riding, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down. While I was riding, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down.

When I was riding, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down. When I was riding, a car passed by but it didn't slow down.

When using "but", you do not need a comma. Only use a comma when you are not using a transition word.

I had to ridepull over towards the roadbed which is made of earth. I had to pull over towards the roadbed which is made of earth.

(You could also say it was made of "gravel" or "dirt")

I had to ride towards the roadbed which is made of earthedge of the road which was full of dirt and gravel. I had to ride towards the edge of the road which was full of dirt and gravel.

I had to ride towards the roadbed which is made of earthside of the road. I had to ride towards the side of the road.

The statement doesn't seem to make much sense, I suggest this instead

And the roadbed is about 5 cms lower than the road. And the roadbed is about 5 cm lower than the road.

And the roadbed iedge of the road was about 5 cms lower than the road. And the edge of the road was about 5 cm lower than the road.

AndThe side of the roadbed is about 5 cms lower than the road. The side of the road is about 5 cms lower.

When I arrived, I found out that one aunt wasn't at home. When I arrived, I found out that one aunt wasn't at home.

Your sentence was alright, but I added "I found out that" to connect the two parts a little more.

When I arrived, one aunt wasn't at home. When I arrived, one aunt wasn't home.

The other had just finished picking longan. The other had just finished picking longan.

The other had just finished picking longan. The other had just finished picking longan.

The other just finished picking up longan. The other just finished picking up longan.

What is longan?

We chatted a lot. We chatted a lot.

We chatted a lot. We chatted a lot.

We chatted a lot. We chatted a lot.

Past tense :)

And thenfter I had lunch with them. After I had lunch with them.

"And" is a transition statement and isn't used at the beginning of a sentence, or new statement.

WhenBefore I leaveft, she asked me to take some eggs whichhome that she just picked up from the farm. Before I left, she asked me to take some eggs home that she just picked up from the farm.

We often say "pick" with fruit/vegetables from a plant or tree (I picked some apples). But with eggs, it's better to say someone just "picked them up."

When I leaveft, she asked me to take some eggs which she just picked from the farm. When I left, she asked me to take some eggs which she just picked from the farm.

When I leaveft, she asked me to take some eggs which she justthat she picked from the farm. When I left, she asked me to take some eggs that she picked from the farm.

Past tense - left, leaved is not a word.

So I refused to take the eggs. So I refused to take the eggs.

Sso I refused. so I refused.

But I took the longan and wampee awaywith me. But I took the longan and wampee with me.

But I took thsome longan and wampee away. But I took some longan and wampee.

But I took the longan and wampee awaywith me. I took the longan and wampee with me.

No but here

ItThe country road is longer than the majorin one, but there are fewer cars. The country road is longer than the main one but there are fewer cars.

Restate the object if you are starting a new sentence

The sun hasd gone down, the clouds wasere pink. The sun had gone down, the clouds were pink.

TWhen the sun has gonewent down, the clouds wasere pink. When the sun went down, the clouds were pink.

The sun hasd gone down, and the cloud wasere pink. The sun had gone down and the cloud were pink.

There are hill far away,s in the distance theyat are so green. There are hills in the distance that are so green.

There are hills far away, they are so green. There are hills far away, they are green.

There are hills far away, they are so green. There are hills far away, they are so green.

The breeze was blowing. The breeze was blowing

No period here, continuing the thought.

Aand birds were flying. and birds were flying.

I felt peace and very happy that I made a rightthe decision to go for the trip. I felt very happy that I made the decision to go for the trip.

(I removed "peaceful" because the next sentence also uses the word peace)

I felt at peace, and very happy that I made athe right decision to go for the trip. I felt at peace, and happy that I made the right decision to go for the trip.

I felt peaceful and very happy that I made athe right decision to go foron the trip. I felt peaceful and very happy that I made the right decision to go on the trip.

Also, I love the nature, it can because it always makes me feel peaceful inside. Also, I love the nature because it always makes me feel peaceful inside.

I love the nature, it can always makes me feel peaceful inside. I love nature, it always makes me feel peaceful inside.

I love the nature, it can always makes me feel peaceful inside. I love nature, it always makes me feel peaceful inside.

And I need to go out more to have a goodimprove my mood. I need to go out more to improve my mood.

And I need to go out more to havebe in a good mood. And I need to go out more to be in a good mood.

And I need to go out more to have a goodimprove my mood. I need to go out more to improve my mood.

New sentence, don't need "and".

I hated theat rude driver. I hated that rude driver.

I hated theat rude driver. I hated that rude driver.

I hated the rude driver. I hated the rude driver.

Past tense uses "ed"

I ate a lot of longan and wampee. I ate a lot of longan and wampee.

I ate a lot of longan and wampee. I ate a lot of longan and wampee.

I ate a lot of logan and wampee. I ate a lot of logan and wampee.

Unsure what Logan and wampee means

Auntie invited me for another visit soon, and said she will cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs. Auntie invited me for another visit soon, and said she will cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs.

In English we often say "auntie" informally as a title (Auntie Pam), and "aunt" when we refer to someone (my aunt).

AMy aunt invited me for another visit soon, andwhen she willplans to cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs. My aunt invited me for another visit soon, when she plans to cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs.

AMy aunt invited me for another visit soon, anshe said she will cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs. My aunt invited me for another visit soon, she said she will cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs.

But because the road is dbumpy, I knew the eggs will be brokenould probably break. But because the road is bumpy, I knew the eggs would probably break.

But the road is dbumpy, and the eggs will be brokenmay break along the way. But the road is bumpy, and the eggs may break along the way.

ButSince the road is dumpyrough, the eggs willould be broken. Since the road is rough, the eggs would be broken.

Dumpy isn't a word, we usually say "rough" - not flat, bumpy or uneven. Period can be removed