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Tammy

Nov. 9, 2025

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Flowers, cats, and birds on my way jogging

I captured some videos while jogging and combined them into this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0

I hope you like it as much as I do.

Next time I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.

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Next time I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.

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Tammy

Nov. 11, 2025

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Nov. 11, 2025

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Flowers, cats, and birds on my way jogging

I hope you like it as much as I do.

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Tammy

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marblemenow

Nov. 11, 2025

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Flowers, cats, and birds on my way jogging


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Flowers, cats, and birds on my way while jogging Flowers, cats, and birds on my way while jogging

A more natural title might be "Jogging alongside flowers, cats and birds"

Flowers, cats, and birds {on my way jogging | along my jogging route | I saw while out jogging} Flowers, cats, and birds {on my way jogging | along my jogging route | I saw while out jogging}

Your original is pretty good, but “my way jogging” doesn’t feel completely natural, so I’ve offered a couple of imperfect alternatives.

I captured some videos while jogging and combined them into this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0


I captured some videos while jogging and combined them into this onevideo: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0 I captured some videos while jogging and combined them into this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0

I captured some videoscenes while jogging and combined them into this onevideo: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0 I captured some scenes while jogging and combined them into this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0

I hope you like it as much as I do.


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I hope you like it as much as I do. I hope you like it as much as I do.

I do like it. :-) I love seeing how wild animals adapt to city life.

Next time I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.


Next time, I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens. Next time, I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.

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