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I felt very tired.because track and field match makes me it.
I want to eat, sleep and take a bath.
I will have delicious dinner today.
mMy heart is so tired.
My heart is so tired
You don't need ending punctuation in a title, but you should still capitalise the first word.
"My heart is so tired" is a bit strange, but it's OK as a title I think, though this is perhaps up to personal preference.
I felt very tired.
That's because I attended a track and field match makes me ievent.
That's because I attended a track and field event.
- Generally, 'because' should not really start a sentence - it doesn't work the same as なぜなら or 理由は. If you use because, it would be good to combine it with the previous sentence - 'I felt very tired because I attended a track and field event'.
- You would use 'match' for a soccer match or a basketball match, but for track and field, you might say a 'race' or an 'event'.
- The first sentence is in the past tense, but the second is in the present tense - you should be consistent, so this is better as past tense.
- You could say 'track and field makes me tired', but 'track and field makes me it' feels unnatural (even though I understand it).
I want to eat, sleep and take a bath.
I will have a delicious dinner today. I will have a delicious dinner today.
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my heart is so tired.
You don't need ending punctuation in a title, but you should still capitalise the first word. "My heart is so tired" is a bit strange, but it's OK as a title I think, though this is perhaps up to personal preference. |
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I felt very tired. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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because track and field match makes me it.
That's because I attended a track and field - Generally, 'because' should not really start a sentence - it doesn't work the same as なぜなら or 理由は. If you use because, it would be good to combine it with the previous sentence - 'I felt very tired because I attended a track and field event'. - You would use 'match' for a soccer match or a basketball match, but for track and field, you might say a 'race' or an 'event'. - The first sentence is in the past tense, but the second is in the present tense - you should be consistent, so this is better as past tense. - You could say 'track and field makes me tired', but 'track and field makes me it' feels unnatural (even though I understand it). |
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I want to eat, sleep and take a bath. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will have delicious dinner today. I will have a delicious dinner today. I will have a delicious dinner today. |
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