is this sound natural?

君はいい目ずっと見ていてにあきない
[君の目はとてもきれいで、ずっと見ていてもあきない]

君のいつもそばにいる
[君のそばにいつもいるよ]

笑顔でいてね

(English)
I never get tired, looking at your beautiful eyes
I'm always by your side
keep on smiling

(Tagalog)
Di ka nakakasawang tignan, pagmasdan ang iyong mga mata
palagi akong nasa iyong tabi
ngumiti ka lang palagi