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Is there a World Heritage site that you'd like to visit?

I would like to visit a pyramid of giza, in Egypt. It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument. I also would like to visit a nature place. Do you have some recommendation?

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I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramid of gGiza, in Egypt.

Assuming you're referring to the Great Pyramid, then you should refer to it using its proper title. In more casual conversation you might say "the pyramid in Giza", but this would assume your conversation partner is aware of it.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.

I also would like to visitsee a natureal place.

The adjectival form of "nature" is "natural". You'll often hear people refer to the "natural world" for example.

Do you have some recommendations?

"any" is also acceptable instead of "some" and may sound softer. Usually we request "recommendations", but you could ask "Do you have a recommendation?"

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If you enjoy natural places then you should visit the Lake District in the UK. There's a lot of hills, mountains, lakes, and forests there. It's beautiful.

Is there a World Heritage site that you'd like to visit?


I would like to visit a pyramid of giza, in Egypt.


I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramid of gGiza, in Egypt.

Assuming you're referring to the Great Pyramid, then you should refer to it using its proper title. In more casual conversation you might say "the pyramid in Giza", but this would assume your conversation partner is aware of it.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.


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I also would like to visit a nature place.


I also would like to visitsee a natureal place.

The adjectival form of "nature" is "natural". You'll often hear people refer to the "natural world" for example.

Do you have some recommendation?


Do you have some recommendations?

"any" is also acceptable instead of "some" and may sound softer. Usually we request "recommendations", but you could ask "Do you have a recommendation?"

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