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TOMO_o

Dec. 2, 2025

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Is there a World Heritage site that you'd like to visit?

I would like to visit a pyramid of giza, in Egypt. It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument. I also would like to visit a nature place. Do you have some recommendation?

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Is there a World Heritage site that you'd like to visit?

I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramids of gGiza, in Egypt.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands of years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.

I also would like to visit a nature placplace with a lot of nature.

Do you have some recommendations?

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Very nice!

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TOMO_o

Dec. 3, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are still many small mistakes here and there, so I think I need to think a little more carefully about how I structure my sentences.
I hope that the meaning of the sentences has been conveyed.

I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramid of gGiza, in Egypt.

It has a name, so it is capitalized.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.

It's really interesting how they did it.

I also would like to visit a nature placWorld Natural Heritage site.

I just learned about this designation.

Do you have some recommendations?

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Your text made me wonder if there are natural places that are World Heritage sites.
There are, and Japan has five of them.
I recommend the Dolomites in Italy.

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TOMO_o

Dec. 3, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are still many small mistakes here and there, so I think I need to think a little more carefully about how I structure my sentences.
I hope that the meaning of the sentences has been conveyed.

Is there a World Heritage site that you'd like to visit?

I would like to visit a pyramid of giza, in Egypt.

It's unbelievable that people who have lived thousands years ago, carried those big rocks and built up thatthose giant monuments.

I also would like to visit a nature placal site.

Do you have some recommendations?

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How about Machu Picchu or Niagara Falls?

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TOMO_o

Dec. 2, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
There are still small mistakes here and there, so I think I need to think more carefully about how I structure my sentences.

I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramid of gGiza, in Egypt.

Assuming you're referring to the Great Pyramid, then you should refer to it using its proper title. In more casual conversation you might say "the pyramid in Giza", but this would assume your conversation partner is aware of it.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.

I also would like to visitsee a natureal place.

The adjectival form of "nature" is "natural". You'll often hear people refer to the "natural world" for example.

Do you have some recommendations?

"any" is also acceptable instead of "some" and may sound softer. Usually we request "recommendations", but you could ask "Do you have a recommendation?"

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If you enjoy natural places then you should visit the Lake District in the UK. There's a lot of hills, mountains, lakes, and forests there. It's beautiful.

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TOMO_o

Dec. 2, 2025

105

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You explain the reason for my mistake and provide other example sentences, which is very helpful for studying.
I've always wanted to visit the UK, so if there's a machine available, I'd like to go there.

Is there a World Heritage site that you'd like to visit?


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I would like to visit a pyramid of giza, in Egypt.


I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramid of gGiza, in Egypt.

Assuming you're referring to the Great Pyramid, then you should refer to it using its proper title. In more casual conversation you might say "the pyramid in Giza", but this would assume your conversation partner is aware of it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramid of gGiza, in Egypt.

It has a name, so it is capitalized.

I would like to visit a pthe Great Pyramids of gGiza, in Egypt.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's unbelievable that people who have lived thousands years ago, carried those big rocks and built up thatthose giant monuments.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.

It's really interesting how they did it.

It's unbelievable that people who lived thousands of years ago carried those big rocks and built up that giant monument.

I also would like to visit a nature place.


I also would like to visitsee a natureal place.

The adjectival form of "nature" is "natural". You'll often hear people refer to the "natural world" for example.

I also would like to visit a nature placal site.

I also would like to visit a nature placWorld Natural Heritage site.

I just learned about this designation.

I also would like to visit a nature placplace with a lot of nature.

Do you have some recommendation?


Do you have some recommendations?

"any" is also acceptable instead of "some" and may sound softer. Usually we request "recommendations", but you could ask "Do you have a recommendation?"

Do you have some recommendations?

Do you have some recommendations?

Do you have some recommendations?

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