April 7, 2024
Is the escalating conflict on the way?
I clearly remember that around three years ago, the US CIA, once warned the world that the Russian army would invade Ukraine a few days ahead of the war broke out. A similar warning has been coming recently; however, this time it is that Iran is ready to attack Israel on April 10 on a larger scale. A significant number of missiles and suicide drones will allegedly target any possible spots related to Israel.
Everyone knows who is behind Iran and Russia; interestingly, the USA shows its interest in negotiating with this country. When we look back, it's unlikely that most authoritarian governments would like to give up their power voluntarily, unless they were forced.
Iran has been sanctioned by the USA for decades. It's concerning that this country is still capable of threatening Israel, which somewhat has proved the ongoing sanction method is not enough or wrong. I personally pray that this war will not happen.
Is thean escalating (OR rising) conflict on the way?
I clearly remember vividly that around three years ago, the US CIA, once had warned the world that the Russian army would invade Ukraine a few days ahead of the wareventual war that broke out.
A similar warning has been coming recently; however, this time, it is that Iran is ready to attack Israel on April 10 on a larger scale.
A significant number of missiles and suicide drones will allegedly target any possible spots related to Israel.
When we look backLooking back on it, it's unlikely that most authoritarian governments would like to give up their seats of power voluntarily, unlesst they were forced. to.
Iran has been sanctioned by the USA for decades.
I personally pray that this war will not happen.
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I remember a song from when I was a child by Edwin Starr called "War." The chorus goes something along the lines of this;
"War, huh.
What is it good for?
Absolutely Nothing" x 2
War has shown to be nothing but a source of pain, strife, suffering, and trauma. And yet we continue to fight, because humans are greedy creatures that can't seem to agree on a single thing without flaunting their new toys
April 11, 2024
Thank you for your corrections! It's painful that there are some groups want to profit from war.
Is the escalating conflict on the way?
I clearly remember that around three years ago, the US CIA, once warned the world that the Russian army would invade Ukraine a few days ahead ofbefore the war broke out.
"ahead of" + something
"before" + something past tense
can't use both at the same time. also, did you mean that the CIA predicted the date? This sentence implies that the US CIA warned them a few days before the war started, but the war did not start 3 years ago (it was two years ago)
A similar warning has been comThere has been a similar warning recently; however, this time it is that Iran is ready to attack Israel on April 10 on a larger scale.
A significant number of missiles and suicide drones will allegedly target any possible spots related to Israel.
can't quite understand "spots related to Israel"
Everyone knows who is behind Iran and Russia; interesti. Strangely, the USA shows its interest in negotiating with this country.
Changing so it's not "interest" twice in a row, stylistic, even though it would be grammatically correct
"to show interest" is a set expression
When we look back, it's unlikely that most authoritarian governments would like to give up their power voluntarily, unless they were forced to.
Iran has been sanctioned by the USA for decades.
It's concerning that this country is still capable of threatening Israel, which has somewhat has proved that the ongoing sanction method is not enough, or wrongis the wrong method.
I personally pray that this war will not happen.
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I hope for peace in the world, and I hope the route will not be as bloody as it has been
April 8, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and explanations!
I made a mistake about the time that occurred between Russia and Ukraine, it should be "TWO" years, not three years.
I clearly remember that around three years ago, the US CIA, (define) once warned the world that the Russian army would invade Ukraine a few days ahead of the war brokeeaking out.
A similar warning has beend cominge recently; however, this time it ithe warning suggests that Iran is ready to attack Israel on April 10 th on a larger scale.
Everyone knows who is behind Iran and Russia; interestingly, the USA shows its interest in negotiating with this country.
When we looking back, it's unlikely that most authoritarian governments would like to give up their power voluntarily, unless they were forced.
It's concerning that this country is still capable of threatening Israel, which somewhat has proveduggests that the ongoing sanction method is not enough or wrong.
I personally pray that this war will not happenwe can avoid this war.
April 8, 2024
Thank you for your corections!
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