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Is "The Boys" the greatest serie on Amazon?

With the same name and based on the comic of American Garth Ennis "The Boys" is a streaming serie that makes you see the superheroes world in other way. The story talk about the fight of a group of normal persons called "The Boys", that at begin they were independent but after they were employeed by CIA, and they have to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".
They live in a corrupt, violent and addict society, there is not too far to own society, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persons with an impeccable morals. In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, as we they are vulnerables of all vices: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like despicable s, arrogants and selfish persons without any kind of consideration to the people that they said they would protected, but at the end they have feelings and own lifes which they want to be save.

During its three seasons we can watch the story of them in a way more violent, bloody and obscene. In my opinion, I think that showing too sex scenes was not appropriate, in a fact they were unnecessary and did not give something to the story. Also the third season tht supposed to be the last , was bore, there was a lot of conflicts, characters and situations that did not bring something interesting to the story and gave us a open end.

Although it has a good actors, visual effects, customes and acceptables scripts, it is not a serie that catch all the people and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or these kind of things.

Now that we have to wait the next season to see what is new or finally the end of the story, I hope more development that it will be coherent with its characters and situations.

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Is "The Boys" the greatest series on Amazon?

With the same name and based on the comic ofBased on the comic with the same name, American Garth Ennis "The Boys" is a streaming series that makelets you see the superheroes world in another way.

Smoother, verbiage frequently used by Americans.

Lets or allows would be smoother than makes, which is more of a forceful word.

Another is necessary instead of other.

The story talk about the fight of a group of normal persons called "The Boys", that atwho at the begin theyning were independent but after they were employeed by the CIA, and they havehad to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".

In addition to the corrections I made, this is a bit of a run-on sentence.

They live in a corrupt, and violent and addict society, thereat is not too far tofrom our own society, but they have to hodput on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights personswhich is to say, good people with an impeccable morals.

I removed "and addict" since I wasn't clear on what you were trying to say. Full of addiction? Addicted to what?

Struggled to translate the second half. Celebrities are not seen by our society as universally good people. We think they should be rolemodels and they try to maintain that image, but it does not fit into the definition.

In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, of good people. Just as we are, they are also vulnerables of to all vices: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like despicable s, arrogants and selfish personsople without any kind of consideration to the people that they said they would protected, but at the end they have feelings

and own lifes which they want to be save.

Unsure what the meaning of that last part I separated out is.

During its three seasons, we can watch the story of themir in a way morethat is very violent, bloody and obscene.

In my opinion, I think that showing toohe sex scenes was not appropriate, i. In a fact, they were unnecessary and did not give somethingadd to the story.

Also the third season thtat was supposed to be the last , was bore, ting. There wasere a lot of conflicts, characters and situations that did non't bring someanything interesting to the story and gave us awere left open ended.

Although it has a good actors, visual effects, customes and acceptables scripts, it is not a series that catch all the peoplwill interest everyone and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or theose kind of things.

Now that we have to wait the next season to see what is new orand what is finally the end of the story,. I hope there will be more development and that it will be coherent with its characters and situations.

With the same name and based on the comic of American Garth Ennis, "The Boys" is a streamingtv series that makes you see the superheroes world in othera different way.

The story talks about the fight of a group of normal personsregular people called "The Boys", that at begin theyfirst were independent but after theyn were employeed by CIA, and theythe CIA. Who have to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".

They live in a corrupt, violent and addict society, therewhich is not too far to own societyur own, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persons with an impeccable morals.

‘Addict’ doesnt really make too much sense here. Also second half doesnt make any sense to me

In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, as wethe same as us, they are vulnerables of to all vices: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like despicable s, arrogants and selfish personsople without any kind of consideration to the people that they said they would protected, but at the end they have feelings and own lifves which they want to be save.

‘They are all the opposite’ not sure what trying to say.

‘Which they want to be save’ dont understand

During its three seasons we can watch the story of them in a way more violent, bloody and obscene.

Need a word after ‘violent, bloody and obscene’ - they are used to describe something yet you havent said what they are describing

In my opinion, I think that showing tootoo many sex scenes wasere shown and not appropriate, in a fact they were unnecessary and did not give something to the story.

Also the third season thtat was supposed to be the last , was boreing, there was a lot of conflicts, characters and situations that did not bring something interesting to the story and gave us an open end.

Although it has a good actors, visual effects, customes and acceptables scripts, it is not a serie that catch all the people and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or these kind of things.

Now that we have to wait until the next season to see what is new or finally the end of the story, I hope there will be more developments that it will be coherent with its characters and situations.

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They live in a corrupt, violent and addict society, therewhich is not too far to own societyur own, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persons with an impeccable morals.

Thank you 👍 but what is the meaning of ur?

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Thank you very much 🤗

Is "The Boys" the greatest series on Amazon?

I think you're a little confused here. The plural is "series", the singular is also "series". There is no "serie" :)

With the same name and based on the comics of the American Garth Ennis, "The Boys" is a streaming series that makes you see the superheroes world in another way.

The comma is a bit picky, but it makes it much easier to read your sentence!

The story talkis about the fight of a group of normal personsdinary people called "The Boys", that at begin. Initially they were independent, but after they were employeed by the CIA, and they haved to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".

At the beginning -> Initially

"Ordinary people" is more appropriate when talking about an everyday, average group of people.

They live in a corrupt, violent and addhedonistict society, there is not too far to own society, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persfrom their own. But they have to maintain a celebrity image, meaning, someonse with an impeccable morals.

"Addict" on its own doesn't make sense. You would have to specify what they are addicted to. Drug addicted? Alcohol addicted? I think a more appropriate word to describe the society is hedonistic.

In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, as we they are vulnerables of all vic of each other, as their vices are their vulnerabilities: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like They are presented as despicable s, arrogants and selfish personsople without any kind of consideration to the people thatose they saidy they would protected, but at the end they have feelings and. Ultimately, they have their own lifes which they want to be saveprotect.

At the end -> Ultimately

During its three seasons, we can watch the story of themwhich is in a way more violent, bloody and obscene (than ?).

It's a little unclear what you are comparing the series to. Are you comparing it to the comics?

In my opinion, I think that showing too thought that the sex scenes wasere not appropriate, in a. In fact, they were unnecessary and did not give someadd anything to the story.

"give something to the story" -> "add anything to the story"

Also the third season thtat was supposed to be the last , was a bore, t. There was a lot of conflicts, and characters and situations that did not bring someadd anything interesting to the story and only gave us an open ending.

"Bore" is a noun not an adjective!

Although it has ad good actors, visual effects, cuostoumes and acceptables design and a decent scripts, it is not a serie that catch all the peoplefor everyone, and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or these kind of thingsings such as gore.

Now that we have to wait for the next season to see what is newnew developments or finally the end of the story, I hope more development that itthe story-telling will be more coherent with its characters and situations.

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This is a very ambitious piece of writing!

I recommend that in future, you try and write in shorter sentences. It's very much recommended that we always try and keep our sentences short and succint. This is because it makes sentences much easier to write, but also much easier to read.

Keep working hard

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During its three seasons, we can watch the story of themwhich is in a way more violent, bloody and obscene (than ?).

No, I am comparing the three seasons in general , it is the same series.

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fannydiaz2

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Thank you very much 🤗

Is "The Boys" the greatest serie on Amazon?


Is "The Boys" the greatest series on Amazon?

I think you're a little confused here. The plural is "series", the singular is also "series". There is no "serie" :)

Is "The Boys" the greatest series on Amazon?

With the same name and based on the comic of American Garth Ennis "The Boys" is a streaming serie that makes you see the superheroes world in other way.


With the same name and based on the comics of the American Garth Ennis, "The Boys" is a streaming series that makes you see the superheroes world in another way.

The comma is a bit picky, but it makes it much easier to read your sentence!

With the same name and based on the comic of American Garth Ennis, "The Boys" is a streamingtv series that makes you see the superheroes world in othera different way.

With the same name and based on the comic ofBased on the comic with the same name, American Garth Ennis "The Boys" is a streaming series that makelets you see the superheroes world in another way.

Smoother, verbiage frequently used by Americans. Lets or allows would be smoother than makes, which is more of a forceful word. Another is necessary instead of other.

The story talk about the fight of a group of normal persons called "The Boys", that at begin they were independent but after they were employeed by CIA, and they have to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".


The story talkis about the fight of a group of normal personsdinary people called "The Boys", that at begin. Initially they were independent, but after they were employeed by the CIA, and they haved to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".

At the beginning -> Initially "Ordinary people" is more appropriate when talking about an everyday, average group of people.

The story talks about the fight of a group of normal personsregular people called "The Boys", that at begin theyfirst were independent but after theyn were employeed by CIA, and theythe CIA. Who have to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".

The story talk about the fight of a group of normal persons called "The Boys", that atwho at the begin theyning were independent but after they were employeed by the CIA, and they havehad to fight against to a particular group of superheroes called "The Seven".

In addition to the corrections I made, this is a bit of a run-on sentence.

They live in a corrupt, violent and addict society, there is not too far to own society, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persons with an impeccable morals.


They live in a corrupt, violent and addhedonistict society, there is not too far to own society, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persfrom their own. But they have to maintain a celebrity image, meaning, someonse with an impeccable morals.

"Addict" on its own doesn't make sense. You would have to specify what they are addicted to. Drug addicted? Alcohol addicted? I think a more appropriate word to describe the society is hedonistic.

They live in a corrupt, violent and addict society, therewhich is not too far to own societyur own, but they have to hod on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights persons with an impeccable morals.

‘Addict’ doesnt really make too much sense here. Also second half doesnt make any sense to me

They live in a corrupt, and violent and addict society, thereat is not too far tofrom our own society, but they have to hodput on an image of celebrities, that is mean, rights personswhich is to say, good people with an impeccable morals.

I removed "and addict" since I wasn't clear on what you were trying to say. Full of addiction? Addicted to what? Struggled to translate the second half. Celebrities are not seen by our society as universally good people. We think they should be rolemodels and they try to maintain that image, but it does not fit into the definition.

In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, as we they are vulnerables of all vices: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like despicable s, arrogants and selfish persons without any kind of consideration to the people that they said they would protected, but at the end they have feelings and own lifes which they want to be save.


In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, as we they are vulnerables of all vic of each other, as their vices are their vulnerabilities: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like They are presented as despicable s, arrogants and selfish personsople without any kind of consideration to the people thatose they saidy they would protected, but at the end they have feelings and. Ultimately, they have their own lifes which they want to be saveprotect.

At the end -> Ultimately

In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, as wethe same as us, they are vulnerables of to all vices: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like despicable s, arrogants and selfish personsople without any kind of consideration to the people that they said they would protected, but at the end they have feelings and own lifves which they want to be save.

‘They are all the opposite’ not sure what trying to say. ‘Which they want to be save’ dont understand

In spite of theirs superpowers, they are all the opposite, of good people. Just as we are, they are also vulnerables of to all vices: sex, violence, alcohol, drugs, etc., and they are displayed like despicable s, arrogants and selfish personsople without any kind of consideration to the people that they said they would protected, but at the end they have feelings

and own lifes which they want to be save.

Unsure what the meaning of that last part I separated out is.

During its three seasons we can watch the story of them in a way more violent, bloody and obscene.


During its three seasons, we can watch the story of themwhich is in a way more violent, bloody and obscene (than ?).

It's a little unclear what you are comparing the series to. Are you comparing it to the comics?

During its three seasons we can watch the story of them in a way more violent, bloody and obscene.

Need a word after ‘violent, bloody and obscene’ - they are used to describe something yet you havent said what they are describing

During its three seasons, we can watch the story of themir in a way morethat is very violent, bloody and obscene.

In my opinion, I think that showing too sex scenes was not appropriate, in a fact they were unnecessary and did not give something to the story.


In my opinion, I think that showing too thought that the sex scenes wasere not appropriate, in a. In fact, they were unnecessary and did not give someadd anything to the story.

"give something to the story" -> "add anything to the story"

In my opinion, I think that showing tootoo many sex scenes wasere shown and not appropriate, in a fact they were unnecessary and did not give something to the story.

In my opinion, I think that showing toohe sex scenes was not appropriate, i. In a fact, they were unnecessary and did not give somethingadd to the story.

Also the third season tht supposed to be the last , was bore, there was a lot of conflicts, characters and situations that did not bring something interesting to the story and gave us a open end.


Also the third season thtat was supposed to be the last , was a bore, t. There was a lot of conflicts, and characters and situations that did not bring someadd anything interesting to the story and only gave us an open ending.

"Bore" is a noun not an adjective!

Also the third season thtat was supposed to be the last , was boreing, there was a lot of conflicts, characters and situations that did not bring something interesting to the story and gave us an open end.

Also the third season thtat was supposed to be the last , was bore, ting. There wasere a lot of conflicts, characters and situations that did non't bring someanything interesting to the story and gave us awere left open ended.

Although it has a good actors, visual effects, customes and acceptables scripts, it is not a serie that catch all the people and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or these kind of things.


Although it has ad good actors, visual effects, cuostoumes and acceptables design and a decent scripts, it is not a serie that catch all the peoplefor everyone, and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or these kind of thingsings such as gore.

Although it has a good actors, visual effects, customes and acceptables scripts, it is not a serie that catch all the people and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or these kind of things.

Although it has a good actors, visual effects, customes and acceptables scripts, it is not a series that catch all the peoplwill interest everyone and I have to say , it is not appropriate to watch if you are a person who does not like the gore or theose kind of things.

Now that we have to wait the next season to see what is new or finally the end of the story, I hope more development that it will be coherent with its characters and situations.


Now that we have to wait for the next season to see what is newnew developments or finally the end of the story, I hope more development that itthe story-telling will be more coherent with its characters and situations.

Now that we have to wait until the next season to see what is new or finally the end of the story, I hope there will be more developments that it will be coherent with its characters and situations.

Now that we have to wait the next season to see what is new orand what is finally the end of the story,. I hope there will be more development and that it will be coherent with its characters and situations.

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