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hebereke

Nov. 5, 2021

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Is multicultural society in society a good thing?

I believe that multicultural society is a good thing. Diversity is the most important value in today's world, because of higher creativity and productivity. Where different groups come across is where creativity exists. A combination of different ideas from different cultures will accelerate the development of arts. For example, in the music industry it happens so often that an artist combine two styles from different culture and makes a hit song. Diversity can lead to the increase of productivity. People from different backgrounds have different skills, and therefore they will cooperate rather than compete with each other and can tackle with various problems. For above reasons, I think multicultural society is what our society should look like.

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Is a multicultural society in society a good thing?

I believe that a multicultural society is a good thing.

Diversity is the most important value in today's world, because of higher creativity and productivity.

Where different groups come acrosstogether is where creativity exists.

or "Where different groups interact is where creativity exists."

A combination of different ideas from different cultures will accelerate the development of the arts.

For example, in the music industry it happens so often that an artist combines two styles from different cultures and makes a hit song.

or "For example, in the music industry, an artist often combines two styles from different cultures and makes a hit song."

Diversity can lead to thean increase ofin productivity.

People from different backgrounds have different skills, and therefore they will cooperate rather than compete with each other and can tackle with various problems.

For the above reasons, I think a multicultural society is what our society should look like.

or "Because of this,...", "For these reasons,..."

Is multicultural society in society a good thing?


Is a multicultural society in society a good thing?

I believe that multicultural society is a good thing.


I believe that a multicultural society is a good thing.

Diversity is the most important value in today's world, because of higher creativity and productivity.


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Where different groups come across is where creativity exists.


Where different groups come acrosstogether is where creativity exists.

or "Where different groups interact is where creativity exists."

A combination of different ideas from different cultures will accelerate the development of arts.


A combination of different ideas from different cultures will accelerate the development of the arts.

For example, in the music industry it happens so often that an artist combine two styles from different culture and makes a hit song.


For example, in the music industry it happens so often that an artist combines two styles from different cultures and makes a hit song.

or "For example, in the music industry, an artist often combines two styles from different cultures and makes a hit song."

Diversity can lead to the increase of productivity.


Diversity can lead to thean increase ofin productivity.

People from different backgrounds have different skills, and therefore they will cooperate rather than compete with each other and can tackle with various problems.


People from different backgrounds have different skills, and therefore they will cooperate rather than compete with each other and can tackle with various problems.

For above reasons, I think multicultural society is what our society should look like.


For the above reasons, I think a multicultural society is what our society should look like.

or "Because of this,...", "For these reasons,..."

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