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April 6, 2024

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Is lunar landing only good news?

Recently I've seen and heard an increasing amount of news regarding lunar landings. While I highly appreciate them as the results of research for years, I would say that they also give me a touch of loneliness.

The moon was something comforting for me. On my way home in my younger days, I gazed up at it standing on the bank. So mesmerizing it was that I reached out for it despite myself. Even after I got married, had children, and became a grandfather, I looked up at it with my family opening the window on the full moon night. Moon-themed haiku and tanka poems seem to me to evoke nostalgia.

Such impressions of the moon, however, are changing. Now countries around the world are competing to research the planet directly from various aspects to confirm whether it is habitable for humans. Discussing whether rabbits are living there might be taken as nonsense. When I see a baby in the city, I go so far as to think, "How does he or she look up at it when this baby has grown up?"

Progress in science must be a blessing for our future but it still gives me a feeling of bleakness. Today as well, I am looking up at the sky with mixed emotions.

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Is lunar landing only good news?

Recently I've seen and heard an increasing amount of news regarding lunar landings.

While I highly appreciate them as the results of research for years, I would say that they also give me a touch of loneliness.

The moon was something comforting for me.

On my way home in my younger days, I gazed up at it standing on the bank.

SIt was so mesmerizing it was that I reached out for it despite myself.

People usually say this in a slightly different order, but this order works well here because your entry is quite poetic

Even after I got married, had children, and became a grandfather, I looked up at it with my family, opening the window on the full moon night.

Moon-themed haiku and tanka poems seem to me to evoke nostalgia in me.

Such impressions of the moon, however, are changing.

Now countries around the world are competing to research the planet directly from various aspects to confirm whether it is habitable for humans.

Discussing whether rabbits are living there might be taken as nonsense.

When I see a baby in the city, I go so far as to think, "How does he or she look up at it when this baby has grown up?"

Progress in science must be a blessing for our future but it still gives me a feeling of bleakness.

Today as well, I am looking up at the sky with mixed emotions.

IsAre lunar landings only good news?

Recently I've seen and heard an increasing amount of news regarding lunar landings.

While I highly appreciate them as the results of research for yearsyear-long research, I would say that they also give me a touch of loneliness.

The moon was something comforting for me.

On my way home in my younger days, I gazed up at it standing on the bankstood on the bank(?) and gazed up at it.

did you mean "on the river bank"?

So mesmerizing it was that I reached out for it despite myself.

Even after I got married, had children, and became a grandfather, I looked up at it with my family opening thethrough open windows on thenights of full moon night.

Moon-themed haiku and tanka poems seem to me to evoke nostalgia.

Such impressions of the moon, however, are changing.

Now countries around the world are competing to research the planet directly from various aspects to confirm whether it is habitable for humans.

Discussing whether rabbits are living there might be taken as nonsense.

When I see a baby in the city, I go so far as to think, "How does he or she look up at it when this baby has grown upAfter growing up, how would this baby look up at the moon?"

Progress in science must be a blessing for our future but it still gives me a feeling of bleakness.

Today as well, I am looking up at the sky with mixed emotions.

So mesmerizing it was that I reached out for it despite myself.


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SIt was so mesmerizing it was that I reached out for it despite myself.

People usually say this in a slightly different order, but this order works well here because your entry is quite poetic

Even after I got married, had children, and became a grandfather, I looked up at it with my family opening the window on the full moon night.


Even after I got married, had children, and became a grandfather, I looked up at it with my family opening thethrough open windows on thenights of full moon night.

Even after I got married, had children, and became a grandfather, I looked up at it with my family, opening the window on the full moon night.

Moon-themed haiku and tanka poems seem to me to evoke nostalgia.


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Moon-themed haiku and tanka poems seem to me to evoke nostalgia in me.

Is lunar landing only good news?


IsAre lunar landings only good news?

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Recently I've seen and heard an increasing amount of news regarding lunar landings.


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While I highly appreciate them as the results of research for years, I would say that they also give me a touch of loneliness.


While I highly appreciate them as the results of research for yearsyear-long research, I would say that they also give me a touch of loneliness.

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The moon was something comforting for me.


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On my way home in my younger days, I gazed up at it standing on the bank.


On my way home in my younger days, I gazed up at it standing on the bankstood on the bank(?) and gazed up at it.

did you mean "on the river bank"?

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Such impressions of the moon, however, are changing.


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Now countries around the world are competing to research the planet directly from various aspects to confirm whether it is habitable for humans.


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Discussing whether rabbits are living there might be taken as nonsense.


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When I see a baby in the city, I go so far as to think, "How does he or she look up at it when this baby has grown up?"


When I see a baby in the city, I go so far as to think, "How does he or she look up at it when this baby has grown upAfter growing up, how would this baby look up at the moon?"

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Progress in science must be a blessing for our future but it still gives me a feeling of bleakness.


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Today as well, I am looking up at the sky with mixed emotions.


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