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Semanur

Jan. 16, 2025

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Is it benefical to use technology in education?

Nowadays, technology is more use and of course we use technology in education too. it helps students learn better and it helps teachers teach easier.Using technology in education has many benefits.
Firstly, technology becomes learning more interesting. for example, students can learn with videos, with games etc.
Secondly, technology can help students who can't attend classes. For example, the students can take online lessons with applications or youtube videos.
Thirdly, it can help teachers about homework. for example, they can give homework from online applications and they can check comfortably. But for this all students must have access to computer or the internet.
In conclusion, technology is useful in education. it makes learning easier, faster and funier. But we have to make it avilable for everyone.

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Is it benefical to use technology in education?

Nowadays, technology is more usused more and of course we use technology in education too.

it helps students learn better and it helps teachers teach easier. Using technology in education has many benefits.

Firstly, technology becommakes learning more interesting.

fFor example, students can learn with videos, with games, etc.

Secondly, technology can help students who can't attend classes.

For example, the students can take online lessons with applications or yYoutTube videos.

In formal writing, capitalize YouTube because it's a brand. In most casual online conversation, lowercase is fine.

Thirdly, it can help teachers aboutwith homework.

fFor example, they can give homework from online applications and they can check (or grade) it comfortably.

But for this all students must have access to a computer or the internet.

In conclusion, technology is useful in education.

it makes learning easier, faster and more funier.

But we have to make it available for everyone.

Feedback

Very well written! Most of my corrections were either about writing conventions (capitalization, spacing, etc.) or small problems with articles or prepositions, which are a very difficult part of the language.

Nowadays, technology is more useused more than ever and of course we use technology in education too.

Firstly, technology becommakes learning more interesting.

for example, students can learn with videos, with games etc.

Secondly, technology can help students who can't attend classes.

For example, the students can take online lessons with applications oron an app or with youtube videos.

Thirdly, it can help teachers aboutwith homework.

for example, they can give out homework from online applications andthrough an app which they can check comfortably.

But for this all students must have access to a computer orand the internet.

In conclusion, technology is useful in education.

it makes learning easier, faster and more funier.

funnier = more funny

But we have to make it available for everyone.

Feedback

very nice job!

Nowadays, technology is more use and of course we use technology in education too.


Nowadays, technology is more useused more than ever and of course we use technology in education too.

Nowadays, technology is more usused more and of course we use technology in education too.

Is it benefical to use technology in education?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Firstly, technology becomes learning more interesting.


Firstly, technology becommakes learning more interesting.

Firstly, technology becommakes learning more interesting.

for example, students can learn with videos, with games etc.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

fFor example, students can learn with videos, with games, etc.

Secondly, technology can help students who can't attend classes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, the students can take online lessons with applications or youtube videos.


For example, the students can take online lessons with applications oron an app or with youtube videos.

For example, the students can take online lessons with applications or yYoutTube videos.

In formal writing, capitalize YouTube because it's a brand. In most casual online conversation, lowercase is fine.

Thirdly, it can help teachers about homework.


Thirdly, it can help teachers aboutwith homework.

Thirdly, it can help teachers aboutwith homework.

for example, they can give homework from online applications and they can check comfortably.


for example, they can give out homework from online applications andthrough an app which they can check comfortably.

fFor example, they can give homework from online applications and they can check (or grade) it comfortably.

But for this all students must have access to computer or the internet.


But for this all students must have access to a computer orand the internet.

But for this all students must have access to a computer or the internet.

In conclusion, technology is useful in education.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

it makes learning easier, faster and funier.


it makes learning easier, faster and more funier.

funnier = more funny

it makes learning easier, faster and more funier.

But we have to make it avilable for everyone.


But we have to make it available for everyone.

But we have to make it available for everyone.

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it helps students learn better and it helps teachers teach easier.Using technology in education has many benefits.


it helps students learn better and it helps teachers teach easier. Using technology in education has many benefits.

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