July 22, 2020
Is information on the internet right or wrong?
Currently, there are many websites on the internet, which publish news about various issues. The problem is that nowadays anyone can write about anything and publish it on the internet. There is no organization or body to check the authenticity of such information. So, it is advisable we should not always trust a website, which publishes news or provides other information.
There are many examples of such websites. When you, for instance, want to lose weight and want to get some information online, you will find many websites. One should not trust the contents of every website because they promote very strict diets, that may not suit everybody.
So what is the solution? We should only find trusted websites, which is reliable and regularly checked by the responsible government bodies.
Is information on the internet right or wrong?
Currently, there are many websites on the internet, which publish news abouton various issuetopics.
The problem is that nowadays anyone can write about anything and publish it on the internet.
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There are many examples of such websites.
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Good writing! One small issue is that you are putting commas where they are not needed (relative clauses). I think you may be following German usage, but English is different.
July 23, 2020
Thanks a lot for the correction. Yes, you are right. Currently, I am learning German so it is usually mixed with my English. I have to be careful about that!
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So what is the solution? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Is information on the internet right or wrong? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Currently, there are many websites on the internet, which publish news about various issues. Currently, there are many websites on the internet |
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The problem is that nowadays anyone can write about anything and publish it on the internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is no organization or body to check the authenticity of this information. |
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So, it is advisable we should not always trust a website, which publishes news or provides other information. So |
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There are many examples of such websites. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When you, for instance, want to lose weight and want to get some information online, you will find many websites.
Not wrong, just better this way. |
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One should not trust the contents of every website because they promote very strict diets, that may not suit everybody.
In the previous sentence you used "you" so it would sound strange to switch to "one." |
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We should only find trusted websites, which is reliable and regularly checked by the responsible government bodies. We should only |
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There is no organization or body to check the authenticity of such information. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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