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Is Hadrid more complex then we think?

I have to do a short speech and manage a round table at one interesting and important event.
Below there is a part of my speech :

The "Dark Hagrid"

Rewatching the saga the 100th time I suddenly realised that there are several unanswered questions to the one well-known character, namely Rubius Hagrid.
While he usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", "a gentle giant" in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.
For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.
Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost get them killed.
As a teacher, he showed students dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.
His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information needed . It is strange, is not it?
Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful persons from different structures (we call it connections) for examle Dumbledore and the Minister of Magic.

So who is Rubius Hagrid- friend, enemy, an agent or a spy?

He is definitely not just a simple Keeper of the Keys.

But who he is? What he hides in the Magic Wood? What are his real intentions?

We all have to think carefully about it.

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Is Hadrid more complex then we think?

I have to do a short speech and manage a round table at onean interesting and important event.

Below there is a part of my speech :

The "Dark Hagrid"

Rewatching the saga for the 100th time I suddenly realiszed that there are several unanswered questions to the oneabout a well-known character, namely Rubius Hagrid.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", or a "a gentle giant" in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost get them killed.

As a teacher, he showed students a dangerous Hhippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information needed .

It is strange, is not it?

Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful persons from different structures (we call it connections) for example Dumbledore and the Ministery of Magic.

So who is Rubius Hagrid- friend, enemy, an agent or a spy?

He is definitely not just a simple Keeper of the Keys.

But who he is?

What is he hidesing in the Magic Wood?

The forbidden forest..

What are his real intentions?

We all have to think carefully about it.

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"Than" instead of "then" in the title.

Is Hadrid more complex thean we think?

Below there is a part of my speech :

"below there" would be if it was below somewhere seperate to the current context, like if you were pointing out a printed copy of your speech was under a table.

"Below is" is how you say in writing that your speech is further along in the current piece of writing

RWhile rewatching the saga the 100th time I suddenly realised that there are several unanswered questions to theabout one well-known character, namely Rubieus Hagrid.

Hagrid's name is pronounced as if it was spelled Rubius but it's actually spelled Rubeus.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and a "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", "a gentle giant" in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

Since the quoted phrase resolves to a noun (because it ends in uncle) an "a" should be applied to the quote as a whole.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

(Also, he / He also) told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost geot them killed.

This kind of sentence starting "also" is sort of an conjuction, and is normally seperated by a comma. Alternatively you can move it after the subject and then it's treated more as a an adverb.

"get" -> "got" - matching the tense of the rest of the sentence

As a teacher, he showed students a dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provides Harry with exactly the information needed .

It is strange, (is non't it / is it not)?

No one actually expands out "isn't it" to "is not it" in modern English - if they want to be more formal/wordy, the order is "is it not" but a plain "isn't it" is more common.

Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful persons from different structureorganisations (we call it connections), for example, Dumbledore and the Minister of Magic.

So who is Rubieus Hagrid - a friend, an enemy, an agent or a spy?

But who he isis he?

What does he hides in the Magic Wood?

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The error in the title is "then." The word to use for comparison is "than."

Is Hadgrid more complex then we think?

I have to do a short speech and manage a round table at one interesting and important event.

Below there is ayou can read part of my speech :.

You could also say "You can read part of my speech below" or "Here you can see part of my speech". They sound a bit more natural.

The "Dark Hagrid"

RWhile I was rewatching the saga for the 100th time I suddenly realised that there are several unanswered questions to theabout one well-known character, namely Rubius Hagrid.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird", uncle",or perhaps "a gentle giant", in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost geot them killed.

As a teacher, he showed students the dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information needed .

It i's strange, is non't it?

Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful personsople from different structures (we call it connections) for examleparts of society (called "having connections"), such as Dumbledore and the Minister of Magic.

So who is Rubius Hagrid-: friend, enemy, an agent or a spy?

He is definitely not just a simple Keeper of the Keys.

But who he is?

What is he hidesing in the Magic Wood?

What are his real intentions?

We all have to think carefully about it.

Feedback

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Is Hadgrid more complex then we think?

I have to do a short speech and manage a round table at one interesting and important event.

Below there is a part of my speech :

The "Dark Hagrid"

Rewatching the saga for the 100th time I suddenly realiszed that there are several unanswered questions to the one well-known character, namely Rubieus Hagrid.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as the kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", "a gentle giant", in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost geot them killed.

As a teacher, he showed students the dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information he needed .

It is strange, is not it?

So who is Rubieus Hagrid- friend, enemy, an agent, or a spy?

He is definitely not just a simple Keeper of the Keys.

But who he isis he?

What is he hidesing in the Magic Wood?

What are his real intentions?

We all have to think carefully about it.

Is Hadrid more complex then we think?


Is Hadgrid more complex then we think?

Is Hadgrid more complex then we think?

Is Hadrid more complex thean we think?

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I have to do a short speech and manage a round table at one interesting and important event.


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I have to do a short speech and manage a round table at onean interesting and important event.

Below there is a part of my speech :


Below there is a part of my speech :

Below there is ayou can read part of my speech :.

You could also say "You can read part of my speech below" or "Here you can see part of my speech". They sound a bit more natural.

Below there is a part of my speech :

"below there" would be if it was below somewhere seperate to the current context, like if you were pointing out a printed copy of your speech was under a table. "Below is" is how you say in writing that your speech is further along in the current piece of writing

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The "Dark Hagrid"


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Rewatching the saga the 100th time I suddenly realised that there are several unanswered questions to the one well-known character, namely Rubius Hagrid.


Rewatching the saga for the 100th time I suddenly realiszed that there are several unanswered questions to the one well-known character, namely Rubieus Hagrid.

RWhile I was rewatching the saga for the 100th time I suddenly realised that there are several unanswered questions to theabout one well-known character, namely Rubius Hagrid.

RWhile rewatching the saga the 100th time I suddenly realised that there are several unanswered questions to theabout one well-known character, namely Rubieus Hagrid.

Hagrid's name is pronounced as if it was spelled Rubius but it's actually spelled Rubeus.

Rewatching the saga for the 100th time I suddenly realiszed that there are several unanswered questions to the oneabout a well-known character, namely Rubius Hagrid.

While he usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", "a gentle giant" in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.


While he is usually viewed and considered by many as the kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", "a gentle giant", in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird", uncle",or perhaps "a gentle giant", in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and a "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", "a gentle giant" in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

Since the quoted phrase resolves to a noun (because it ends in uncle) an "a" should be applied to the quote as a whole.

While he is usually viewed and considered by many as kind, supportive and "sweet, if a little weird, uncle", or a "a gentle giant" in reality there are some clear signs that there is something more here.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.


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For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

For example, he frequently asks Harry, Ron and Hermione (who are minors, by the way ) to cover up his illegal activities, such as smuggling the dragon Norbert.

It is strange, is not it?


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It i's strange, is non't it?

It is strange, (is non't it / is it not)?

No one actually expands out "isn't it" to "is not it" in modern English - if they want to be more formal/wordy, the order is "is it not" but a plain "isn't it" is more common.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost get them killed.


Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost geot them killed.

Also he told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost geot them killed.

(Also, he / He also) told Harry and Ron to "follow the spiders" which almost geot them killed.

This kind of sentence starting "also" is sort of an conjuction, and is normally seperated by a comma. Alternatively you can move it after the subject and then it's treated more as a an adverb. "get" -> "got" - matching the tense of the rest of the sentence

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As a teacher, he showed students dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.


As a teacher, he showed students the dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

As a teacher, he showed students the dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

As a teacher, he showed students a dangerous Hippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

As a teacher, he showed students a dangerous Hhippogriff, underestimating the real risk.

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information needed .


His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information he needed .

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provide Harry with exactly the information needed .

His frequent "I shouldn't have said that" often provides Harry with exactly the information needed .

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful persons from different structures (we call it connections) for examle Dumbledore and the Minister of Magic.


Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful personsople from different structures (we call it connections) for examleparts of society (called "having connections"), such as Dumbledore and the Minister of Magic.

Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful persons from different structureorganisations (we call it connections), for example, Dumbledore and the Minister of Magic.

Being a member of the Order of the Phoenix, Hagrid has access to high-level important information and powerful persons from different structures (we call it connections) for example Dumbledore and the Ministery of Magic.

So who is Rubius Hagrid- friend, enemy, an agent or a spy?


So who is Rubieus Hagrid- friend, enemy, an agent, or a spy?

So who is Rubius Hagrid-: friend, enemy, an agent or a spy?

So who is Rubieus Hagrid - a friend, an enemy, an agent or a spy?

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He is definitely not just a simple Keeper of the Keys.


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But who he is?


But who he isis he?

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But who he isis he?

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What he hides in the Magic Wood?


What is he hidesing in the Magic Wood?

What is he hidesing in the Magic Wood?

What does he hides in the Magic Wood?

What is he hidesing in the Magic Wood?

The forbidden forest..

What are his real intentions?


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We all have to think carefully about it.


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