June 4, 2020
Note) This is a response to ("Do you think humanity exists in the year 10,000 AD? Why or why not? What changes would our current society need to survive for that long?") prompt.
10,000 AD! OMG I doubt if humanity can pass 2020 in the first place.
Now let's put this joke aside, I think the needed changes to survive is to practice SOCIAL DISTANCING.
I hope everyone is happy during quarantine, peace out!
iIs 2020 a joke?
(Note): This is a response to (the question, "Do you think humanity exists in the year 10,000 AD?
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OMGAre you kidding? I doubt if humanity can make it passt 2020 in the first place.
Better not to use expressions like OMG which are more suited to texting, social media, etc. (And in my opinion also make a person sound like a teenage girl.)
Now let's put thisAll jokes aside, I think the needed changeschange we need in order to survive is to practice SOCIAL DISTANCINGsocial distancing.
I hope everyone is happydoing well during quarantine, peace out. Take care!
"Peace out" is an extremely informal expression that many people might not even understand. I've never heard anyone say this in real life.
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Good job!
is 2020 a joke?
Note): This is a response to (the prompt "Do you think humanity exists in the year 10,000 AD?
Why or why not?
What changes would our current society need to survive for that long?")
Parentheses aren't used when quoting something; rather, we just use quotation marks.
prompt.[word already placed earlier in the sentence; generally English speakers don't put a word like this at the end of the sentence.]
10,000 AD!
OMG I doubt if humanity can survive passt 2020 in the first place.
Technically using "OMG" like that is correct, but it's very informal and only used with friends or on the internet.
Now let's putPutting this joke aside, I think the needed changes to survive is to practice SOCIAL DISTANCING.
Since there's only one change, you don't need to write the plural version.
I hope everyone is happy during quarantine, peace out!
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Most of the corrections made were to make the entry a bit more formal or to help make the sentences sound more natural. Keep up the good work.
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OMG I doubt if humanity can pass 2020 in the first place.
Technically using "OMG" like that is correct, but it's very informal and only used with friends or on the internet.
Better not to use expressions like OMG which are more suited to texting, social media, etc. (And in my opinion also make a person sound like a teenage girl.) |
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Let's Put this joke aside, I think the needed changes to pass this year is to practice SOCIAL DISTANCING. |
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I hope everyone is happy during quarantine, peace out! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I hope everyone is "Peace out" is an extremely informal expression that many people might not even understand. I've never heard anyone say this in real life. |
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Now let's put this joke aside, I think the needed changes to pass this year is to practice SOCIAL DISTANCING. |
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Now let's put this joke aside, I think the needed changes to survive is to practice SOCIAL DISTANCING.
Since there's only one change, you don't need to write the plural version.
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