Oct. 8, 2020
Every year, a couple of typhoons hit Japan. Its frequency is different depending on the regions. Okinawa prefecture, where is located in the southernmost, is damaged frequently but Hokkaido, where is located in the northernmost, is hardly harmed. When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that said a typhoon was born because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which would be inconsiderate.
The latest typhoon had formed several days ago; it is approaching Japan. Therefore, it has been bad weather these days. I'm worried about a deluge caused by heavy rain. These kinds of disasters are terrible, especially in the southern area. Last year, a big typhoon crossed Japan and a nearby river in Sendai, where I live, was about to flood. I wonder this is because of global warming.
When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that said a typhoon was bornhad formed because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which would be inconsiderate.
When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that said a typhoon had formed because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which would be inconsiderate.
"A typhoon is born" is not a very normal way to talk about storms in English. It can be used if you were trying to be funny, but a more normal verb would be "to form", like you do below.
A Typhoon is Coming up
Every year, Japan is hit with a couple of typhoons hit Japan.
Every year, Japan is hit with a couple of typhoons.
The word couple can either be singular or plural, depending on the context, however, when you use "a" in front of it, then it becomes singular, as "a" represents "one". I switched the order around to avoid ambiguity.
Its frequency is different depending on the regions.
Its frequency is different depending on the region.
For instance, the Okinawa prefecture, where is located in the southernmost part of Japan, is damaged frequently but Hokkaido, where is located in the northernmost, is hardly ever harmed.
For instance, the Okinawa prefecture, located in the southernmost part of Japan, is damaged frequently but Hokkaido, located in the north, is hardly ever harmed.
When I was ain elementary school student, I was always glad to hear from the news that said a typhoon was born because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which would be inconsiderate.rning has been issued, because that means schools would be closed.
When I was in elementary school, I was always glad to hear from the news that a typhoon warning has been issued, because that means schools would be closed.
I deleted " would be inconsiderate", as that is probably the wrong phrase. Inconsiderate describes someone who is thoughtless, and puts himself above others. I don't think that is what you meant to say.
The latest typhoon had formeds been gathering speed since several days ago; and it is approaching Japan.
The latest typhoon has been gathering speed since several days ago and it is approaching Japan.
Therefore, it has been bad weather these days.the weather has been bad.
Therefore, the weather has been bad.
I'm worried about a deluge caused by heavy rain.
These kinds of disasterDisasters caused by typhoons are terrible, especially in the southern pareat.
Disasters caused by typhoons are terrible, especially in the southern part.
Last year, a big typhoon moved acrossed Japan and a nearby river in Sendai, closed to where I live, was about tolmost flooded.
Last year, a big typhoon moved across Japan and a river in Sendai, closed to where I live, was almost flooded.
You cannot use "was about to flood" as that sounds like something which will occur in the future, not in the past.
I wonder thisif the occurrence of typhoon is because ofd by global warming.
I wonder if the occurrence of typhoon is caused by global warming.
A Typhoon is Coming up
Every year, a couple of typhoons hit Japan.
ItsThe frequency is differents depending on the regions.
The frequency differs depending on the regions.
Okinawa prefecture, where is locatedich ins the southernmost prefecture, is damaged frequently, but Hokkaido, whereich is located in the northernmost, is hardly harmed.
Okinawa prefecture, which is the southernmost prefecture, is damaged frequently, but Hokkaido, which is located in the north, is hardly harmed.
When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that said a typhoon was born because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which would beas a bit inconsiderate of me.
When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that a typhoon was born because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which was a bit inconsiderate of me.
I'm not sure what you mean by "inconsiderate" here. I corrected it as if you meant that you were being inconsiderate by being happy that a typhoon was coming, but if you meant something else, feel free to clarify and I'll try to improve the correction.
The latest typhoon had formed several days ago; it and is approaching Japan.
The latest typhoon formed several days ago and is approaching Japan.
Therefore, ithere has been bad weather these days.
Therefore, there has been bad weather these days.
I'm worried about a delugeflood caused by heavy rain.
I'm worried about a flood caused by heavy rain.
"Deluge" means large amount of water, and is sometimes used instead of the word "flood" but it is not very common. Flood is the word which is most natural to use for most situations.
These kinds of disasters are terrible, especially in the southern area.
Last year, a big typhoon crossed Japan and a nearby river in Sendai, where I live, was about to flood.
I wonder if this is because of global warming. I wonder if this is because of global warming.
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English is quite good. Stay safe over there!
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A Typhoon is Coming up This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every year, a couple of typhoons hit Japan. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Every year, Japan is hit with a couple of typhoons The word couple can either be singular or plural, depending on the context, however, when you use "a" in front of it, then it becomes singular, as "a" represents "one". I switched the order around to avoid ambiguity. |
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Its frequency is different depending on the regions.
Its frequency is different depending on the region |
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Okinawa prefecture, where is located in the southernmost, is damaged frequently but Hokkaido, where is located in the northernmost, is hardly harmed.
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When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that said a typhoon was born because if a storm warning is issued, elementary schools will be closed, which would be inconsiderate.
When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that I'm not sure what you mean by "inconsiderate" here. I corrected it as if you meant that you were being inconsiderate by being happy that a typhoon was coming, but if you meant something else, feel free to clarify and I'll try to improve the correction.
When I was I deleted " would be inconsiderate", as that is probably the wrong phrase. Inconsiderate describes someone who is thoughtless, and puts himself above others. I don't think that is what you meant to say.
When I was an elementary school student, I was glad to hear the news that said a typhoon "A typhoon is born" is not a very normal way to talk about storms in English. It can be used if you were trying to be funny, but a more normal verb would be "to form", like you do below. |
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The latest typhoon had formed several days ago; it is approaching Japan.
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The latest typhoon ha |
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Therefore, it has been bad weather these days.
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Therefore, |
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I'm worried about a deluge caused by heavy rain.
I'm worried about a "Deluge" means large amount of water, and is sometimes used instead of the word "flood" but it is not very common. Flood is the word which is most natural to use for most situations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These kinds of disasters are terrible, especially in the southern area. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Last year, a big typhoon crossed Japan and a nearby river in Sendai, where I live, was about to flood. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Last year, a big typhoon moved across You cannot use "was about to flood" as that sounds like something which will occur in the future, not in the past. |
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I wonder this is because of global warming. I wonder if this is because of global warming. I wonder if this is because of global warming.
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