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abolfazl

July 21, 2025

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iran

Hi every one, I'm one of the people in Iran and now i want to speaking about Iran. Iran is one of the oldest country with history more than 2500 in the world. It has a lot of historical building like Persepolis

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Hi every one, I'm one of the people ina native of Iran and now i want to speaking about Iran.

I cannot say why "one of the people in Iran" sounds funny. You could say I am in Iran. We know you are a person (people).
To speak (infinitive) or to be speaking (action in process).

Iran is one of the oldest countryies in the world with a history of more than 2500 in the worldyears.

One of many instead of one of one.

It has a lot of historical buildings like Persepolis

a lot of many instead a lot of one. Is Persepolis a building or a city?

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It is good that you learned speaking. This is a huge part of learning how English works.

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abolfazl

July 22, 2025

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Thanks for your help.

iran

Iran. (Capitalize).

Hi every one, I'm one of the people infrom Iran and now iI want to speaking (or talk) about Iran.

Minor corrections

Iran is one of the oldest countryies with history more than 2500 in the worldyears of history.

Rewording to sound more natural.

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Great job!

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abolfazl

July 21, 2025

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thanks for your help

iran


iran

Iran. (Capitalize).

Hi every one, I'm one of the people in Iran and now i want to speaking about Iran.


Hi every one, I'm one of the people infrom Iran and now iI want to speaking (or talk) about Iran.

Minor corrections

Hi every one, I'm one of the people ina native of Iran and now i want to speaking about Iran.

I cannot say why "one of the people in Iran" sounds funny. You could say I am in Iran. We know you are a person (people). To speak (infinitive) or to be speaking (action in process).

Iran is one of the oldest country with history more than 2500 in the world.


Iran is one of the oldest countryies with history more than 2500 in the worldyears of history.

Rewording to sound more natural.

Iran is one of the oldest countryies in the world with a history of more than 2500 in the worldyears.

One of many instead of one of one.

It has a lot of historical building like Persepolis


It has a lot of historical buildings like Persepolis

a lot of many instead a lot of one. Is Persepolis a building or a city?

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