Feb. 10, 2021
Pumps
These are two different models of pumps that was tested in our laboratory.
The first model is acting as a forevacuum pump, mounted at the base of vacuum chamber and additionally putted into steel enclosure to shield ambient against heat radiation.
The second pump is the main pumping device and it makes the vacuum more better.
Special cables serve as a electrodes providing electrical current to the pumps.
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The first model is acting as a forevacuum pump, mounted at the base of vacuum chamber and additionally puttlaced into a steel enclosure to shield the ambient space against heat radiation.
The first model is acting as a forevacuum pump, mounted at the base of vacuum chamber and additionally placed into a steel enclosure to shield the ambient space against heat radiation.
The past tense of put is also put, but it sounds more professional if you say "placed." There might be a better technical term for forevacuum pump - maybe vacuum pre-pump or pre-vacuum pump.
The second pump is the main pumping device and it makes the vacuum more better.
The second pump is the main pumping device and it makes the vacuum better.
If this is a technical document, you can say "The second pump is the main pumping device and increases the efficiency of the vacuum." "More better" is redundant.
Special cables serve as a electrodes providing electrical current to the pumps.
Feb. 11, 2021
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These are two different models of pumps that was tested in our laboratory. |
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The first model is acting as a forevacuum pump, mounted at the base of vacuum chamber and additionally putted into steel enclosure to shield ambient against heat radiation.
The first model is acting as a forevacuum pump, mounted at the base of vacuum chamber and additionally p The past tense of put is also put, but it sounds more professional if you say "placed." There might be a better technical term for forevacuum pump - maybe vacuum pre-pump or pre-vacuum pump. |
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The second pump is the main pumping device and it makes the vacuum more better.
The second pump is the main pumping device and it makes the vacuum If this is a technical document, you can say "The second pump is the main pumping device and increases the efficiency of the vacuum." "More better" is redundant. |
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Special cables serve as a electrodes providing electrical current to the pumps. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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