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Touched by An Short Video

I came across a short video on Rednote this morning. The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, you need to make time for stud,
for thinking and for your health". I sounds very simple. After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my cycle didn't do this. They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes. They are working day and night, thought some of them have been very rich. I think maybe busy working has been a culture in my Circle - Chinese IT industry. Without busy work, they will feel uncomfortable and even don't know what they should do. I uaed to be like this too,lol 😂
Now, I think it's really sad. I don't think work is all my life anymore.

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I came across a short video on Rednote this morning.

for thinking and for your health".

They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes.

Now, I think it's really sad.

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I came across a short video on Rednote this morning.

They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes.

Now, I think it's really sad.

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Touched by An Short Video

I came across a short video on Rednote this morning.

I sounds very simple.

They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes.

I uaed to be like this too,lol 😂

Now, I think it's really sad.

I don't think work is all my life anymore.

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Touched by An Short Video


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I came across a short video on Rednote this morning.


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The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, you need to make time for stud,


The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, you need to make time for studying, The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, you need to make time for studying,

The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, y. You need to make time for studying, The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time. You need to make time for studying,

for thinking and for your health".


for thinking, and for your health". for thinking, and for your health".

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I sounds very simple.


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It sounds very simple. It sounds very simple.

It sounds very simple. It sounds very simple.

After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my cycle didn't do this.


After thinking about it I found that it really makes sense and most people in my cycllife didon't do this. After thinking about it I found that it really makes sense and most people in my life don't do this.

Talking in present tense - "didn't" is a past tense. e.g. "I didn't do it" indicates of something in the past.

After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my cycle didfield aren't doing this. After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my field aren't doing this.

After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my cyircle didon't do this. After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my circle don't do this.

They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes.


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They are working day and night, thought some of them have been very rich.


They are working day and night, thought some of them have beenare very rich. They are working day and night, thought some of them are very rich.

They are working day and night, thought some of them have been very ricwere already quite rich to begin with. They are working day and night, though some of them were already quite rich to begin with.

They are working day and night, thought some of them have beenalready become very rich. They are working day and night, though some of them have already become very rich.

I think maybe busy working has been a culture in my Circle - Chinese IT industry.


I think maybe busyhard working has been a culture in my Circle - Chinese IT industry. I think maybe hard working has been a culture in my Circle - Chinese IT industry.

busy working isn't the correct statement. Hard-working is a better alternative.

I think maybe busy working perhaps been a culture in my Circle -extreme work culture is quite prevalent in my field, i.e. in the Chinese IT industry. I think perhaps extreme work culture is quite prevalent in my field, i.e. in the Chinese IT industry.

I think maybe busyincessant working has becomen a culture in my Ccircle - the Chinese IT industry. I think maybe incessant working has become a culture in my circle - the Chinese IT industry.

Without busy work, they will feel uncomfortable and even don't know what they should do.


Without busany work, they willould feel uncomfortable and even don't even know what they should do. Without any work, they would feel uncomfortable and don't even know what they should do.

Without busyhenever they are not working, they will feel uncomfortable and even don't even know what they should doo do with themselves. Whenever they are not working, they feel uncomfortable and don't even know what to do with themselves.

Without busy work, they will feel uncomfortable and even dwon't know what they should do. Without work, they will feel uncomfortable and even won't know what they should do.

Busywork refers to unnecessary tasks. I’m guessing you don’t mean busywork.

I uaed to be like this too,lol 😂


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I uased to be like this too, lol 😂 I used to be like this too lol 😂

I uased to be like this too, lol 😂 I used to be like this too, lol 😂

Now, I think it's really sad.


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I don't think work is all my life anymore.


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I don't think work is all mythere is to life anymore. I don't think work is all there is to life anymore.

I don't think work is {all my life | my whole life} anymore. I don't think work is {all my life | my whole life} anymore.

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