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Touched by An Short Video
I came across a short video on Rednote this morning. The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, you need to make time for stud,
for thinking and for your health". I sounds very simple. After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my cycle didn't do this. They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes. They are working day and night, thought some of them have been very rich. I think maybe busy working has been a culture in my Circle - Chinese IT industry. Without busy work, they will feel uncomfortable and even don't know what they should do. I uaed to be like this too,lol 😂
Now, I think it's really sad. I don't think work is all my life anymore.
Touched by Ana Short Video
I came across a short video on Rednote this morning.
The young female author said in the video, "Don't let busy work take all your time, you need to make time for studying,
for thinking, and for your health".
It sounds very simple.
After thinking about it I found it really makes sense and most people in my cycle didfield aren't doing this.
They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes.
They are working day and night, thought some of them have been very ricwere already quite rich to begin with.
I think maybe busy working perhaps been a culture in my Circle -extreme work culture is quite prevalent in my field, i.e. in the Chinese IT industry.
Without busyhenever they are not working, they will feel uncomfortable and even don't even know what they should doo do with themselves.
I uased to be like this too, lol 😂
Now, I think it's really sad.
I don't think work is all mythere is to life anymore.
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Mostly just edited some sentences so they sound more natural and still get across more or less what you would like to say.
Overall good job, and nicely written ! :)
Touched by An Short Video
I came across a short video on Rednote this morning.
I sounds very simple.
After thinking about it I found that it really makes sense and most people in my cycllife didon't do this.
Talking in present tense - "didn't" is a past tense. e.g. "I didn't do it" indicates of something in the past.
They are always struggling to get a high salary, no matter what it takes.
They are working day and night, thought some of them have beenare very rich.
I think maybe busyhard working has been a culture in my Circle - Chinese IT industry.
busy working isn't the correct statement. Hard-working is a better alternative.
Without busany work, they willould feel uncomfortable and even don't even know what they should do.
I uaed to be like this too,lol 😂
Now, I think it's really sad.
I don't think work is all my life anymore.
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