March 20, 2021
iPad
I wonder if I should purchase 8th generation of iPad now or wait until the new generation will be released. What I want to do with iPad is writing English articles for LangCorrect during my commute to work. Smartphone's screen is so small that my eyesight has gradually deteriorated. Aside from writing posts, I'd like to watch animes on Netflix, reading online books, and organizing my photos. One of my hobbies is photography. I used to take photos with old lens and retouch the photos by photoshop.
Even though I realize that advanced features such as large storage and versatile connecter aren't required to fulfil my purpose, I can't get rid of my thought that it is good time to buy iPad air or new generation since Apple is supposed to announce the release of new models on March 23.
What I want to do with iPad is writinge English articles for LangCorrect during my commute to work.
SA smartphone's screen is so small that my eyesight has gradually deteriorated.
Aside from writing posts, I'd like to watch animes on Netflix, reading online books, and organizing my photos.
"Anime" has been accepted as a single and plural word in proper English. You might hear or see some native speakers add the "s" to "anime".
One of my hobbies is photography.
I used to take photos with old lens and retouch the photos by pin Photoshop.
Photoshop (the program) is a proper noun so it should be capitalized. The action "to photoshop" is a verb, so it doesn't need to be capitalized.
Even though I realize that advanced features such aslike large storage and a versatile connecter aren't required to fulfilfor my purposes, I can't get rid of mythe thought that it is's a good time to buy an iPad aAir or a new generationmodel since Apple is supposed to announce the release of new models on March 23.
Feedback
I have the same issue with Apple products. I think that you should wait until the 23rd and then decide.
私もApple製品で同じ問題です。23日まで待ってから決めた方がいいと思います。
March 21, 2021
Thank you for your correction. I will follow your advice. Which model do you want to buy? If I find that new models are an iPad pro and an iPad mini, I'm going to buy 8th generation of iPad.
March 21, 2021
I'm thinking about getting an iPad mini, but I want to try both of them before making a decision.
|
iPad |
|
I wonder if I should purchase 8th generation of iPad now or wait until the new generation will be released. |
|
What I want to do with iPad is writing English articles for LangCorrect during my commute to work. What I want to do with iPad is writ |
|
Smartphone's screen is so small that my eyesight has gradually deteriorated.
|
|
Aside from writing posts, I'd like to watch animes on Netflix, reading online books, and organizing my photos. Aside from writing posts, I'd like to watch anime "Anime" has been accepted as a single and plural word in proper English. You might hear or see some native speakers add the "s" to "anime". |
|
One of my hobbies is photography. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I used to take photos with old lens and retouch the photos by photoshop. I used to take photos with old lens and retouch the photos Photoshop (the program) is a proper noun so it should be capitalized. The action "to photoshop" is a verb, so it doesn't need to be capitalized. |
|
Even though I realize that advanced features such as large storage and versatile connecter aren't required to fulfil my purpose, I can't get rid of my thought that it is good time to buy iPad air or new generation since Apple is supposed to announce the release of new models on March 23. Even though I realize that advanced features |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium