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Haruto

Dec. 28, 2024

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My day one

Today I started to practice my english again, this is my firts articul I writted, I very excepted 'cause I'm going to start 2025 very good ;)

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My day one


My day onefirst day My first day

Reads better. Or you could just say “day one”

My dDay oOne Day One

"Day One" or "My First Day"

My first day one My first day

Today I started to practice my english again, this is my firts articul I writted, I very excepted 'cause I'm going to start 2025 very good ;)


Today I startedbegan to practice my english again, this is mythe firtst articul Ile I have writtedn , I am very excepited 'because I'm going to start 2025 very goodwell ;) Today I began to practice my english again, this is the first article I have written , I am very excited because I'm going to start 2025 well ;)

“Started” makes sense, but “began” reads better ‘I have written’ -imperfect tense ‘Expected’ -do you mean excited?

Today I started to practiceing my eEnglish again, t. This is mythe firtst articul Ile I've writted, In. I'm very excepited 'cause I'm going to start 2025 off very goodwell. ;) Today I started practicing my English again. This is the first article I've written. I'm very excited 'cause I'm going to start 2025 off very well. ;)

Today I started to practice my eEnglish again, and this is mythe firtst articule I have writted, In. I am very excepited 'because I'm going to start out 2025 very good ;) Today I started to practice my English again and this is the first article I have written. I am very excited because I'm going to start out 2025 very good ;)

“Article” is not used in this context. Saying “entry” or “paragraph” would make more sense. “Writted” is not the past tense of “write,” the correct past form is “wrote.” Also, since the paragraph is mostly present tense it makes more sense to say “…this is the first article I am writing,” rather than “written.”

Today I started to practice my english again, this is my firtst articule I writoted, I am very excepited 'because I'm going to start 2025 very good ;) Today I started to practice my english again, this is my first article I wrote, I am very excited 'because I'm going to start 2025 very good ;)

Some spelling mistakes like excited and then tenses for eg write -> wrote

Today, I started to practice my eEnglish again, and this is my firtst articule I writted, Iote. I am very excepited 'cause I'm going to start 2025 very goodwell ;) Today, I started to practice my English again and this is my first article I wrote. I am very excited 'cause I'm going to start 2025 very well ;)

Today I started to practice my eEnglish again, this is mythe firtst articule I writoted, I am very excepited 'because I'm going to start 2025 very goodoff on a good foot ;) Today I started to practice my English again, this is the first article I wrote, I am very excited because I'm going to start 2025 off on a good foot ;)

'cause is not used in written English, only in spoken, very informal language "start off on a good foot" is an idiom meaning "to begin well/from a good position"

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