Introspectionve writing

1- I saw oil and water running under my feet, all that greasy and colorful liquid somehow make the water a completely different form of stateconsistency.

The shapes that barely touches each other.

There, a feather bird fights to take the wind down.

Somehow it trusts his brave,mself to not fall, to not lose.

My eyes met hits.

and I immediately understood it .

Introspection wve Writing

1- I saw oily water running under my feet, a. All that greasy and colorful liquid somehow maketurned the water into a completely different form of state.

Separating into two sentences felt more natural in this case. Instead of "form", you can also use "form of matter" or "state of matter" since you are writing metaphorically.

The sShapes that barely touches each other.

I wonder at what cost were they separated in a past life.?

2- The wind carries all the bad thoughts away, i. It´s getting cold.

Separating into two sentences felt more natural in this case.

There, a feathered bird fights to take the wind down.

Somehow it trusts hits bravery, to not fall, to not lose.

Your next sentence uses "its", so I'm changing for consistency.

aAnd I immediately understood it .