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alexwong2164

Nov. 27, 2021

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Introspection: Open a business

So, I like snooker so much that I want to open a snooker club.

Am I really like this sport?

How do you measure “like”?

So I compare me to my other friends who like this sport.

As result, I feel shame!

Compare to them I am not devote, not passion…not anything!

I still open a snooker club and enjoy this sport.

But before I do that there are many other aspects that I can do it now to show my love of “snooker”.

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AmDo I really like this sport?

So I compared meyself to my other friends who like this sport.

As a result, I feel ashamed!

Compared to them I am not devoted, not passionate…not anything!

I stillBut I would still like to open a snooker club and enjoy this sport.

But before I do that, there are many other aspectthings that I can do it now to show my love of snooker.

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Really good, just pay attention to the differences between adjectives and nouns :)

Introspection: Open a business


So, I like snooker so much that I want to open a snooker club.


Am I really like this sport?


AmDo I really like this sport?

How do you measure “like”?


So I compare me to my other friends who like this sport.


So I compared meyself to my other friends who like this sport.

As result, I feel shame!


As a result, I feel ashamed!

Compare to them I am not devote, not passion…not anything!


Compared to them I am not devoted, not passionate…not anything!

I still open a snooker club and enjoy this sport.


I stillBut I would still like to open a snooker club and enjoy this sport.

But before I do that there are many other aspects that I can do it now to show my love of “snooker”.


But before I do that, there are many other aspectthings that I can do it now to show my love of snooker.

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