Nov. 21, 2021
Introduction letter
Dear John,
I am Li Ming, an over-sea student who is going to share the apartment with you. I am very exciting and I wish we can get along well next year. To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance.
First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late. I will try my best to keep my voice down for not to disturb your sleep. Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend. Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind. Last, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a rest.
I do hope we can meet soon. By the way, I have never been there before, could you give me some advice about living there?
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
<p>Hey there，here is my composition practicing for a vital exam. Please correct it and give me some advice. Thanks!</p>
<p>Here are the directions:</p>
<p>Suppose you are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John, a local student. Write him an email to</p>
<p>1) tell him about your living habits, and</p>
<p>2) ask for advice about living there. </p>
Introduction letter
Dear John,
I am Li Ming, an over-seas student who is going to share the apartment with you.
I am very excitinged to meet you, and I wishhope we can get along well next year.
To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance.
First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late.
I will try my best to keep my voice down foras not to disturb your sleep.
Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend.
wow, so early!
Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind.
I would not advise you to do this.
Lastly, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a resting.
I do hope we can meet soon.
By the way, I have never been thereo (place name) before, could you give me some advice about living there?
Yours sincerely,
Feedback
Lovely! If this is a real letter please don't make your housemates food unless you're good friends. Some people can take advantage of you and will abuse your kindness.
Nov. 21, 2021
Thanks for your advice ！ Actually the reason I wrote that is just for padding out. I can't get up such early either.XD
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I am Li Ming, an over-sea student who is going to share the apartment with you. I am Li Ming, an over |
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I am very exciting and I wish we can get along well next year. I am very excit |
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To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will try my best to keep my voice down for not to disturb your sleep. I will try my best to keep my voice down |
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Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend.
wow, so early! |
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Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind. Maybe I can make you I would not advise you to do this. |
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Last, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a rest. Lastly, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am |
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I do hope we can meet soon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By the way, I have never been there before, could you give me some advice about living there? By the way, I have never been t |
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Yours sincerely, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Li Ming |
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