SteppeBrother's avatar
SteppeBrother

Aug. 6, 2020

0
Introduction Example

Over the last decades, in spite of the fact that average wealth has grown, more and more people is experiencing stress in their lives. Today, the stress rate in the society is on its historical peak. In developed countries, two-thirds of the population claim to suffer from this problem. In this essay I will discuss the main factors which causes stress in modern life and propose solutions to deal with this situation.

Corrections

Introduction Example

Over the last decades, in spite of the fact that average wealth has grown, more and more people isare experiencing stress in their lives.

Today, the stress rate in the society is onat its historical peak.

In developed countries, two-thirds of the population claim to suffer from this problem.

In this essay I will discuss the main factors which causes stress in modern life and propose solutions to deal with this situation.

Introduction Example

Over the last decades, in spite of the fact that average wealth has grown, more and more people isare experiencing stress in their lives.

‘Last’ usually refers to a singular thing but you could use ‘previous decades’

Today, the stress rate in the society is onat its historical peak.

In this essay I will discuss the main factors which causes stress in modern life and propose solutions to deal with this situation.

Feedback

The stringing of ideas is very nice. I’d only suggest you to be more careful about the singular/ plural forms.

Intorduction Example


Over the last decades, in spite of the fact that average wealth has grown, more and more people is experiencing stress in their lives.


Over the last decades, in spite of the fact that average wealth has grown, more and more people isare experiencing stress in their lives.

‘Last’ usually refers to a singular thing but you could use ‘previous decades’

Over the last decades, in spite of the fact that average wealth has grown, more and more people isare experiencing stress in their lives.

Today, the stress rate in the society is on its historical peak.


Today, the stress rate in the society is onat its historical peak.

Today, the stress rate in the society is onat its historical peak.

In developed countries, two-thirds of the population claim to suffer from this problem.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this essay I will discuss the main factors which causes stress in modern life and propose solutions to deal with this situation.


In this essay I will discuss the main factors which causes stress in modern life and propose solutions to deal with this situation.

In this essay I will discuss the main factors which causes stress in modern life and propose solutions to deal with this situation.

Introduction Example


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium