Feb. 19, 2024
Introduction
Bounjour. J’mapelle Evaly. Je suis vingt-deux ans et j’apprends le français pour l’école .J’habite au Canada. Je écrire un paragraphe sur un sujet differént pour améliorer. J’apprécie toute aide à la correction.
Hello. My name is Evaly. I am twenty-deux years old and I am learning French for school.I live in Canada. I am writing a paragraph on a different subject each day to improve. I appreciate any help with corrections.
IntroducPrésentation
A short text where you tell about yourself is rather called "une présentation" in French
"Une introduction" is a short text presenting a longer one or a larger subject
Bounjour.
J’mae m'appelle Evaly.
Apostrophes (') stand where a vowel is elided, which can only appear in front of a vowel. For instance, "me" turns into "m'" in front of the <a> of <appelle>, the <'> replacing the <e>
It can't happen to "je" in front of "me", in standard French
Je suis'ai vingt-deux ans et j’apprends le français pour l’école . J’habite au Canada.
In French (and in all romance languages for that matter), you "have" your age, you "are" not it => j'ai vingt-deux ans
If your school is a college (I'm presuming this because of your age), "pour l'université" would be far better
No space before a period, a space after
Je 'écrireai un paragraphe sur un sujet differéntérent chaque jour pour m'améliorer.
Same logic as above, je+vowel => j'
It's an anticipation of a future action, so I'd rather use a future here. "J'écris chaque jour" would mean you've already made this habit => écrirai
Nasal sounds (such as in <ent>) never carry accents. The <é> stands where you hear /e/ => diffÉrent
every day, each day = chaque jour
It's transitive when you "improve yourself" => S'améliorer
J’apprécie toute aide à lapour les corrections.
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Introduction
A short text where you tell about yourself is rather called "une présentation" in French "Une introduction" is a short text presenting a longer one or a larger subject |
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Bounjour. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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J’mapelle Evaly. J Apostrophes (') stand where a vowel is elided, which can only appear in front of a vowel. For instance, "me" turns into "m'" in front of the <a> of <appelle>, the <'> replacing the <e> It can't happen to "je" in front of "me", in standard French |
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Je suis vingt-deux ans et j’apprends le français pour l’école .J’habite au Canada. J In French (and in all romance languages for that matter), you "have" your age, you "are" not it => j'ai vingt-deux ans If your school is a college (I'm presuming this because of your age), "pour l'université" would be far better No space before a period, a space after |
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Je écrire un paragraphe sur un sujet differént pour améliorer. J Same logic as above, je+vowel => j' It's an anticipation of a future action, so I'd rather use a future here. "J'écris chaque jour" would mean you've already made this habit => écrirai Nasal sounds (such as in <ent>) never carry accents. The <é> stands where you hear /e/ => diffÉrent every day, each day = chaque jour It's transitive when you "improve yourself" => S'améliorer |
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J’apprécie toute aide à la correction. J’apprécie toute aide |
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