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alch3m1st

May 1, 2022

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Introduction

Hi everyone,

I am new in this site, this is the first journal I am publishing, so I would like to quickly introduce myself. I am 33 years old, I am from Hungary, but at the moment I live in Austria. I like playing board games, meeting with my friends or relateives, taking a hike and exploring new cities.

I would like to publish journals in this site regularly to practice English and German. At the moment I feel that I don't have problem with comprehension, but my speaking and writing skills are not good enough. In my job I use English on a daily basis, but sometimes it takes quiet a lot of time to write an email.

Corrections

Introduction

Hi everyone,

I am new into this site, and this is the first journal I am publishing, so. So, I would like to quickly introduce myself.

You could also say "therefore" instead of "so"

I am 33 years old, I am from Hungary, but at the moment I live in Austria.

I like playing board games, meeting up with my friends or relateives, taking a hikes and exploring new cities.

I would like to publish journals ion this site regularly to practice English and German.

At the moment I feel that I don't have a problem with comprehension, but my speaking and writing skills are not good enough.

In my job, I use English on a daily basis, but sometimes it takes quiete a lot ofng time to write an email.

Feedback

Very good writing and a nice introduction :)

Introduction


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Hi everyone,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am new in this site, this is the first journal I am publishing, so I would like to quickly introduce myself.


I am new into this site, and this is the first journal I am publishing, so. So, I would like to quickly introduce myself.

You could also say "therefore" instead of "so"

I am 33 years old, I am from Hungary, but at the moment I live in Austria.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like playing board games, meeting with my friends or relateives, taking a hike and exploring new cities.


I like playing board games, meeting up with my friends or relateives, taking a hikes and exploring new cities.

I would like to publish journals in this site regularly to practice English and German.


I would like to publish journals ion this site regularly to practice English and German.

At the moment I feel that I don't have problem with comprehension, but my speaking and writing skills are not good enough.


At the moment I feel that I don't have a problem with comprehension, but my speaking and writing skills are not good enough.

In my job I use English on a daily basis, but sometimes it takes quiet a lot of time to write an email.


In my job, I use English on a daily basis, but sometimes it takes quiete a lot ofng time to write an email.

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