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Aug. 8, 2025

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Introducing myself and my family

Hi, everybody
My name is Maili, I'm 22 years old and I'm here for improve my writing skills.
I'm studying to be a translator and interpreter, I am unemployed now, but I hope to find a work soon. I live in Lima, Peru with my parents and my two younger brothers. I have four pets, there're called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir. I'm an introverted person, I don't hang out with my friends because people make me feel uncomfortable. I love reading romantic book, because I like to feel many emotions and to live many lifes. I love listening to music too, my favourite singer could be Taylor Swift.

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Hi, everybody
. My name is Maili, I'm 22 years old and I'm here forto improve my writing skills.

I'm studying to be a translator and interpreter,. I am unemployed now, but I hope to find a work soon.

I have four pets, - therey're called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir.

Or without dash:
I have four pets, called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir.

I'm an introverted person,. I don't hang out with my friends because people make me feel uncomfortable.

To me "introverted person" isn't completely natural. Just "I'm introverted" sounds better.

I love reading romantic books, because I like to feel many emotions and to live many lifves.

I love listening to music too,; my favourite singer could beis Taylor Swift.

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Nice sentences, good luck with the job hunt!

Introducing myself and my family

Hi, everybody My name is Maili, I'm 22 years old and I'm here for improve my writing skills.

Hi, everybody
. My name is Maili, I'm 22 years old and I'm here forto improve my writing skills.

I'm studying to be a translator and interpreter, I am unemployed now, but I hope to find a work soon.

I'm studying to be a translator and interpreter,. I am unemployed now, but I hope to find a work soon.

I live in Lima, Peru with my parents and my two younger brothers.

I have four pets, there're called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir.

I have four pets, - therey're called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir.

Or without dash: I have four pets, called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir.

I'm an introverted person, I don't hang out with my friends because people make me feel uncomfortable.

I'm an introverted person,. I don't hang out with my friends because people make me feel uncomfortable.

To me "introverted person" isn't completely natural. Just "I'm introverted" sounds better.

I love reading romantic book, because I like to feel many emotions and to live many lifes.

I love reading romantic books, because I like to feel many emotions and to live many lifves.

I love listening to music too, my favourite singer could be Taylor Swift.

I love listening to music too,; my favourite singer could beis Taylor Swift.

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