Feb. 21, 2022
Introducing myself
Well, my full name is Navid Rostami. My first name is Navid, and my Surname is Rostami. You can call me Navid. I don’t have any nicknames. My name means proposition. it’s not a common name in my country, since I’ve never met anyone same name as mine. Because of that, I think that my name is unique. My surname is Rostami which refers to the ancient hero called Rostam. I have never felt any pressure on myself because I was never compared to him in my life.
Traditionally In Iran, the names of newborn children are given by their grandparents, however, mine was different. My older brother's best friend is also named same as me. I am named after him who my older brother really admires. However, He was a real chatterbox. My older brother came up with my name, and my parents both liked and agreed on.
This writing is about introducing yourself to your dorm friend(prefer native on(American)).
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My older brother's best friend was also named salso has the same name as me.
despite liking my name, he is a little bitfairly happy-go-lucky person.
Consequently, he just came up with my name, and which my parents both liked and agreed on.
Although my grandparents resisted in front of this decision, they were flexible.
If you’re interested in why they didn’t make a fuss, I can tell one thing.
it’s not a common name in my country because I’m no don't seeing many people with my name.
As a result of not seeing someone with the same name as me, I think that my name is unique.
I have never felt any pressure onwith myself because I was never compared to him in my life.
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nice one
Feb. 25, 2022
Thanks a lot for corrections
Introducing myself
Well, Mmy first name is Navid, and my surname is Rostami.
ThusSo, my full name is Navid Rostami.
You can call me Navid.
Traditionally In Iran, the name of newborn babies are given by their grandparents, buthowever mine was different.
My older brother's best friend was also named sgiven the same name as me.
He liked him too mucha lot.
dDespite liking my name, he is a little bit of a happy-go-lucky person.
Besides he is toovery smart and kind.
My surname is Rostami which refers to the ancient hero called Rostam.
Consequently, he just came up with my name, and both my parents both liked and agreed on it.
Although my grandparents resisted in front of this decision at first, they were flexible.
If you’re interested incurious as to why they didn’t fuss, I can'll tell you one thing.
Because of lovinghow much they loved my brother, they accepted.
My name means annunciation or proposition.
iIt’s not a common name in my country because I’m noas I don't seeing many people with my name.
As a result of not seeing someonBecause I don't see anyone with the same name as me, I think that my name is unique.
I have never felt any pressure on myself because I was never compared to him in my entire life.
Introducing myself
Well, My first name is Navid, and my surname is Rostami.
No need for the comma
Thus, my full name is Navid Rostami.
You can call me Navid.
Traditionally In Iran, the name of newborn babies are given their names by their grandparents, but mine was different.
Reordering the words this way will make the sentence more clear.
My older brother's best friend was also named sgiven the same name as me.
He liked him too much.
It is unclear who the words "he" and "him" are referring to here.
despite liking my name, he is a little bit happy-go-lucky person.
The use of the word "despite" here is strange since there doesn't seem to be a conflict between the first and second clauses of the sentence.
My surname is Rostami which refers to the ancient hero called Rostam.
Besides he is tooHe is very smart and kind.
ConsequentEventually, he just came up with my name, and my parents both liked it and agreed on.
Although my grandparents resisted in front of thiswere against their decision, they were flexiblenient.
If you’re interested in why they didn’t fuss, I can tellargue, I'll say one thing.
Because of loving my brother, they acceptgreed.
My name means annunciation or proposition.
it’s not a common name in my country because I’m not seeing many people with my nameIn my country, my name is uncommon.
As a result of not seeing someone sameI think that my name ais me, I think that my name is uniquunique, since I haven't met anyone with the same name.
I have never felt any pressure on myself cause I was never compared to him in my life.
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Good job!
one piece of advice I'll give is to make sure that whenever you use pronouns like "he" or "she", make sure it is clear who you are referring to so that readers are not confused.
Feb. 25, 2022
Thanks a lot for corrections and your advice. I will try using it
Introducing myself
Well, My first name is Navid, and my surname is Rostami.
Thus, my full name is Navid Rostami.
not incorrect, but quite formal
Traditionally In Iran, the name of a newborn babies arey is given by their grandparents, but mine was different.
My older brother's best friend was also named sshared the same name as me.
He liked hims friend too much.
despite liking my name, he is a little bitHe is also a happy-go-lucky person.
Besides he is too smart and kind.
this sentence seems unnecessary here!
My surname is Rostami which refers to the ancient hero called Rostam.
Consequently, he just came up with my name, and my parents both liked it and agreed onto it.
Although my grandparents resisted in front ofinitially resisted this decision, they were flexible.
If you’re interested in why they didn’t make a fuss, I can tell you one thing.
Because ofthey lovinged my brother, they accepted.
My name means annunciation or proposition.
iIt’s not a common name in my country because I’m, and I have not seeingn many people with my name.
As a result of notSince I have yet to seeing someone with the same name as me, I think that my name is unique.
I have never felt any pressure on myself cause I wasbecause of this as I have never been compared to him in my life.
Introducing myself
WHello, My first name is Navid, and my surname is Rostami.
ThusSo, my full name is Navid Rostami.
Thus is kinda formal
You can call me Navid.
Traditionally In Iran, the name of newborn babies are givenis followed by their grandparents', but mine wais different.
My older brother's best friend wais also named the same as me.
He liked him too much.
despitHe likinges my name,. he is a little bit's got a happy-go-lucky person.attitude
My surname is Rostami which refers to the ancient hero called Rostam.
BesidesAlso he is toso smart and kind.
Consequently, he justFor the record, he is the one who came up with my name, and my parents both liked and agreed onit.
Althoughdespite my grandparents resisted in front of' disagreement about this decision, they were flexible.
If you’re interested incurious why they didn’t fuss, I can tell you one thing.
Because of lovingthe love they have for my brother, they accepted.
My name means annunciation or proposition.
it’s not a common name in my country because I’m not seeing many people with my nam, since I’ve never met anyone with the same name as mine.
As a result of not seeing someone same name as meBecause of that, I think that my name is unique.
for the sake of redundancy
I ha've never felt any pressure on myself cause I was neverbeen compared to him in my life., so had no pressure.
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Well done~ had fun reading it
Feb. 25, 2022
Thanks a lot for corrections
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Well, my full name is Navid Rostami. |
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My first name is Navid, and my Surname is Rostami. |
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I don’t have any nicknames. |
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My name means proposition. |
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it’s not a common name in my country, since I’ve never met anyone same name as mine. |
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Because of that, I think that my name is unique. |
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I have never felt any pressure on myself because I was never compared to him in my life. |
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Traditionally In Iran, the names of newborn children are given by their grandparents, however, mine was different. |
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My older brother's best friend is also named same as me. |
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I am named after him who my older brother really admires. |
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However, He was a real chatterbox. |
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My older brother came up with my name, and my parents both liked and agreed on. |
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