Sept. 20, 2022
Introducing Me
I come from China.Welcome to visit my matherland!I'm a new member of the net,so I hope that I can meet more and more kind people.Yes, I'm so hopeful.I will enter socity.Emmm......I don't know I say someting now.That's right.
Introducing Meyself
"Introducing Me" isn't technically wrong, and could be a stylistic choice. In most cases, using "myself" would be less awkward.
I come from China. Welcome to visit my maotherland! I'm a new member of the Internet, so I hope that I can meet more and moreany kind people. Yes, I'm so hopeful. I will enter society. Emmm......I don't know I say sometingwhat to say right now. That's right.
Did you mean that you don't know what to say, or that you're looking for something to say? Also, the "that's right" could be confusing. What are you referring to as "right"?
Introducing: Me
I come from China. Welcome to visit my maotherland! I'm a new member of the internet, so I hope that I can meet more and more kind people. Yes,. I'm so hopeful. I will enter society. Emmm...... I don't know. I am going to say something now. That's right.
Introducing Meyself
I come'm from China.W You're always welcome to visit my matherland!home country! I'm a new member of the to the internet, so I hope that I can meet more and more kind people. Yes, I'm so hopeful. that I will enter society.E Ermmm...... I don't know I say someting now.That's rightwhat to say right now. Yeah.
I will enter society = 社会人になるということですか。それとも、たくさんのオンラインの友達になるということですか。
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Welcome to the site! English can be hard to learn at times, but if you keep on making journal entries and reading more English texts, you'll get better and better.
There were many corrections, but don't let that discourage you. Some of them were more stylistic changes that English textbooks don't always state.
Also, I recommend finding out how to turn on English spellcheck. It's a very useful tool that puts a red line under misspelled words, and even native English speakers use it. It's not perfect, but I think in this case, it would be very helpful.
Sept. 20, 2022
Thanks very much
Introducing Meyself
Generally, when the subject and object are both I/me, you should use "myself."
I comeam from China.W I welcome you to visit my maotherland! I'm a new member of the internet, so I hope that I can meet more and more kind people.Yes, I'm so hopeful. I will enter society.E Ummm...... I don't know I say sometingwhat to say now. That's right.
Next time, please split your sentences with spaces :)
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Sept. 20, 2022
Thank you.
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Introducing Me Introducing M Generally, when the subject and object are both I/me, you should use "myself." Introducing M Introducing: Me Introducing M "Introducing Me" isn't technically wrong, and could be a stylistic choice. In most cases, using "myself" would be less awkward. |
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I come from China.Welcome to visit my matherland!I'm a new member of the net,so I hope that I can meet more and more kind people.Yes, I'm so hopeful.I will enter socity.Emmm......I don't know I say someting now.That's right. I Next time, please split your sentences with spaces :) I I will enter society = 社会人になるということですか。それとも、たくさんのオンラインの友達になるということですか。 I come from China. Welcome to visit my m I come from China. Welcome to Did you mean that you don't know what to say, or that you're looking for something to say? Also, the "that's right" could be confusing. What are you referring to as "right"? |
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