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Soso_86CNCQ

Oct. 10, 2024

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Introduce myself

Hii !
I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year . I need it for my studies . So I’m actually lvl B1 almost B2 but I try every days to improve my English , I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it . I have a few contact with English people so it’s cool for me . I love the Chinese culture and anyways I speak Chinese fluently. So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .
For the information I speak American English instead British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understand.
So bye bye everyone! 👋

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Introduce ming Myself

Hii !

I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvevel C1 in onlywithin one year .

So I’m actualcurrently lvevel B1, but almost B2 but. I try every days to improve my English ,. I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .to help me learn.

I have a fewlittle contact with English-speaking people, so it’s coohelpful for me .

I love the Chinese culture and anyways Ilready speak Chinese fluently.

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .

For theyour information, I speak American English instead of British English cuzbecause I thought that the American English wasould be better b. But it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways! I just want to learn English, theat basically English that everybody will understand.

I have a few contacts with English people so it’s cool for me .

maybe instead of contacts you whatever your relationship with them is, like put friends/family

I love the Chinese culture and anyways I speak Chinese fluently.

So I hope that you all can help me with my English .

"you'll" is "you will" so you can either get rid of "can" or say "you all can"

For the information I speak American English instead British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understand.

I don't recommend using slang like "cuz" too much and "for the information" doesn't make a lot of sense(at the moment i can't think of any replacements(╥﹏╥))

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your English is quite good٩(^ᗜ^ )و ´-

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Oct. 12, 2024

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Thank you for explanations and correction !

Hii !

I’m Sonia , from France, and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year .

I need it for my studies .

So I’m actually lvevel B1, almost B2, but I try every days to improve my English , I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .

I have a fewsome contact with English-speaking people so it’s cool for me .

english people = des anglais
english-speaking people = des anglophones

I love the Chinese culture and anyways II also speak Chinese fluently.

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .!

For thmore information, I speak American English instead of British English cuz, because I thought that the American English was better, but it’s a bit weird sometimes but a. Anyways, I just want to learn English, the basically English that basically everybody understands.

So bye bye everyone!

👋

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great work on your English! very casual and I'm sure your friends have taught you well :)

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Soso_86CNCQ

Oct. 11, 2024

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Tank you!

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Soso_86CNCQ

Oct. 11, 2024

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And yes they did

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Oct. 11, 2024

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But I need to improve yet

Introduceing myself (or Self-introduction)

Hii !

I’m Sonia , from France, and I would like to be lvl C1 in onlyreach level C1 within just one year .

I need it for my studies .

So I’m actually lvlat B1 level, almost B2, but I try every days to improve my English ,. I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it that purpose.

I have a fewlittle contact with English people, so it’s cool for me .
(or I don't usually make contact with English-speakers, so it's cool for me.)

I love the Chinese culture and any. By the ways, I speak Chinese fluently.

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .

For theyour information, I speak American English instead of British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but a. Anyways, I just want to learn English, the the basically (or fundamental) English that everybody understands.

"cuz" is okay, but it's more formal to just say "because" or "'cause" (don't forget the apostrophe if you say "'cause")

So bye bye everyone!

👋

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Good job! Just keep going :)

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Soso_86CNCQ

Oct. 11, 2024

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Very Interesting thx !

Introduceing myself

Hii !

I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year .

I need it for my studies .

So I’m actually lvl B1, almost B2, but I try every days to improve my English ,. I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .

I have a few contacts with English people so it’s cool for me .

I love the Chinese culture and anyways II also speak Chinese fluently.

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .

If you want to use the future tense, you have to say "you'll be able to." Just one of its quirks as an irregular verb.

For theyour information, I speak American English instead of British English cuz I thought that the American English was better, but it’s a bit weird sometimes but a. Anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understands.

So bye bye everyone!

👋

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I'm assuming you want to sound casual (since you used some online slang like "lvl"), so I didn't correct a lot of your writing. If this isn't what you want, let me know and I'll keep that in mind. Otherwise good job, you just have some awkward and run-on sentences.

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Soso_86CNCQ

Oct. 11, 2024

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Yes I used cuz ik some abstract words but yes i’m gonna to make short sentences , thx very much !

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Introduce ming Myself

Hii !


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Hii !

Hii !

Hii !

I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year .


I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year .

I’m Sonia , from France, and I would like to be lvl C1 in onlyreach level C1 within just one year .

I’m Sonia , from France, and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year .

I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvevel C1 in onlywithin one year .

I need it for my studies .


I need it for my studies .

I need it for my studies .

I need it for my studies .

So I’m actually lvl B1 almost B2 but I try every days to improve my English , I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .


So I’m actually lvl B1, almost B2, but I try every days to improve my English ,. I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .

So I’m actually lvlat B1 level, almost B2, but I try every days to improve my English ,. I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it that purpose.

So I’m actually lvevel B1, almost B2, but I try every days to improve my English , I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .

So I’m actualcurrently lvevel B1, but almost B2 but. I try every days to improve my English ,. I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it .to help me learn.

I have a few contact with English people so it’s cool for me .


I have a few contacts with English people so it’s cool for me .

I have a fewlittle contact with English people, so it’s cool for me .
(or I don't usually make contact with English-speakers, so it's cool for me.)

I have a fewsome contact with English-speaking people so it’s cool for me .

english people = des anglais english-speaking people = des anglophones

I have a few contacts with English people so it’s cool for me .

maybe instead of contacts you whatever your relationship with them is, like put friends/family

I have a fewlittle contact with English-speaking people, so it’s coohelpful for me .

I love the Chinese culture and anyways I speak Chinese fluently.


I love the Chinese culture and anyways II also speak Chinese fluently.

I love the Chinese culture and any. By the ways, I speak Chinese fluently.

I love the Chinese culture and anyways II also speak Chinese fluently.

I love the Chinese culture and anyways I speak Chinese fluently.

I love the Chinese culture and anyways Ilready speak Chinese fluently.

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .


So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .

If you want to use the future tense, you have to say "you'll be able to." Just one of its quirks as an irregular verb.

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .!

So I hope that you all can help me with my English .

"you'll" is "you will" so you can either get rid of "can" or say "you all can"

So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .

For the information I speak American English instead British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understand.


For theyour information, I speak American English instead of British English cuz I thought that the American English was better, but it’s a bit weird sometimes but a. Anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understands.

For theyour information, I speak American English instead of British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but a. Anyways, I just want to learn English, the the basically (or fundamental) English that everybody understands.

"cuz" is okay, but it's more formal to just say "because" or "'cause" (don't forget the apostrophe if you say "'cause")

For thmore information, I speak American English instead of British English cuz, because I thought that the American English was better, but it’s a bit weird sometimes but a. Anyways, I just want to learn English, the basically English that basically everybody understands.

For the information I speak American English instead British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understand.

I don't recommend using slang like "cuz" too much and "for the information" doesn't make a lot of sense(at the moment i can't think of any replacements(╥﹏╥))

For theyour information, I speak American English instead of British English cuzbecause I thought that the American English wasould be better b. But it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways! I just want to learn English, theat basically English that everybody will understand.

So bye bye everyone!


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