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jzsuzsi

Oct. 22, 2021

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Introduce myself

Hello.

I am Zsuzsa. I live with my family in Veszprém, Hungary.

I am a chemical engineer and now I work part-time as a development engineer in a small Hungarian company, which produces and distributes industrial cleaning products.

In my free time, I like to run and do yoga. I am so proud that two years ago I ran the marathon.

I think I am creative, ambitious, and trustworthy.

In the next period, I want to focus on practicing my English. I aim to make conversation in English self-confident besides making as few mistakes as I can.

I think I am between level A2 and B1. My future goal is to achieve level C1.

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Introduceing myself

Hello.

I am Zsuzsa.

I live with my family in Veszprém, Hungary.

I am a chemical engineer and now I work part-time as a development engineer in a small Hungarian company, which produces and distributes industrial cleaning products.

In my free time, I like to run and do yoga.

I am so proud that two years ago I ran the marathon.

I think I am creative, ambitious, and trustworthy.

I aim to makebe self-confident in making conversations in English self-confident besidesand making as few mistakes as I can.

I think it is better structured in this way.

I think I am between level A2 and B1.

My future goal is to achieve level C1.

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Awesome writing! Very few errors, keep going at it! :)

Introduce myself


Introduceing myself

Hello.


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I am Zsuzsa.


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I live with my family in Veszprém, Hungary.


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I am a chemical engineer and now I work part-time as a development engineer in a small Hungarian company, which produces and distributes industrial cleaning products.


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In my free time, I like to run and do yoga.


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I am so proud that two years ago I ran the marathon.


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I think I am creative, ambitious, and trustworthy.


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In the next period, I want to focus on practicing my English.


I aim to make conversation in English self-confident besides making as few mistakes as I can.


I aim to makebe self-confident in making conversations in English self-confident besidesand making as few mistakes as I can.

I think it is better structured in this way.

I think I am between level A2 and B1.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My future goal is to achieve level C1.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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