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Sept. 26, 2020

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Introduce myself

I have been learning English since kindergarten, but in my country, people seldom speak in English, therefore I lack chances to use English in my daily life. Therefore, I watched a lots drama for learning English. I am a big fan of drama show, my favorite drama is Breaking Bad, all the characters are outstanding, the plot is always surprising and exciting, I learn some slang from it. I visit some english speaking countries, I could communitcate with them but sometimes I can't describe what I thought in English. This problem push me to learn better English.

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Introduce ming Myself

Or: "Self Introduction"

I have been learning English since kindergarten, but people in my country, people seldom speak in English, thereforeso I lack chances to use English in my daily life.

Therefore, I watched a lotsmany drama fors to learning English.

Or: "Therefore, I watched many dramas while learning English."

I am a big fan of drama show,s, and my favorite drama is Breaking Bad, a. All the characters are outstanding, the plot is always surprising and exciting, I learn some slang from itand the slang is useful for learning English.

I changed the last sentence to maintain parallel structure. This means having "the characters," "the plot," and "the slang," instead of suddenly going from "the X" to "I learn."

I have visited some eEnglish speaking countries, and I could communitcate with them bpeople there. But, sometimes I caouldn't describe what Imy thoughts in English.

This problem pushes me to learn betterimprove my English.

Introduce myself


Introduce ming Myself

Or: "Self Introduction"

I have been learning English since kindergarten, but in my country, people seldom speak in English, therefore I lack chances to use English in my daily life.


I have been learning English since kindergarten, but people in my country, people seldom speak in English, thereforeso I lack chances to use English in my daily life.

Therefore, I watched a lots drama for learning English.


Therefore, I watched a lotsmany drama fors to learning English.

Or: "Therefore, I watched many dramas while learning English."

I am a big fan of drama show, my favorite drama is Breaking Bad, all the characters are outstanding, the plot is always surprising and exciting, I learn some slang from it.


I am a big fan of drama show,s, and my favorite drama is Breaking Bad, a. All the characters are outstanding, the plot is always surprising and exciting, I learn some slang from itand the slang is useful for learning English.

I changed the last sentence to maintain parallel structure. This means having "the characters," "the plot," and "the slang," instead of suddenly going from "the X" to "I learn."

I visit some english speaking countries, I could communitcate with them but sometimes I can't describe what I thought in English.


I have visited some eEnglish speaking countries, and I could communitcate with them bpeople there. But, sometimes I caouldn't describe what Imy thoughts in English.

This problem push me to learn better English.


This problem pushes me to learn betterimprove my English.

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