Nov. 6, 2019
Introduce myself
Hello! I'm Shiera. I'm new here. I'm an office worker. My dream is to travel all of the world to enjoy local dishes. I like watching movies. I want to watch movies without Japanese subtitle. I hope I can help you to learn Japanese and you can help me to learn English. Thank you and best regards.
こんにちは！私はシエラです。初参加です。OLです。世界中を食べ歩くのが私の夢です。映画を見るのが好きです。日本語の字幕なしで映画を見たいです。日本語を学ぶお手伝いができればいいなと思います。また、私の英語の勉強を助けてくれると嬉しいです。宜しくお願い致します。
Self Introducetion¶
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Introducing myself
My dream is to travel all of the world to enjoy local dishes.
I want to be able to watch movies without Japanese subtitles.
Adding this sounds a bit more natural I feel.
I hope I can help you to learnimprove your Japanese and you can help me to learnimprove my English.
Feedback
Well done :) . I hope we can help each other.
Nov. 11, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
Hello!
I'm Shiera.
I'm new here.
I'm an office worker.
My dream is to travel all ofver the world to enjoy local dishes.
I like watching movies.
I want to watch movies without Japanese subtitles.
I hope I can help you to learn Japanese and you can help me to learn English.
Thank you and best regards.
Nov. 11, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
Hello!
I'm Shiera.
I'm new here.
I'm an office worker.
My dream is to travel all ofver the world toand enjoy local dishes.
you will mostly likely do sightseeing so I think it's better to use 'and' here
I want to watch movies without Japanese subtitles.
Thank you and best regards.
Feedback
What country do you want to visit first? Why?
Nov. 7, 2019
My dream is to travel all ofver the world toand enjoy local dishes.
I understand the difference between when using 'to' and when using 'and'
Thank you ^^
Nov. 7, 2019
I've visited Taiwan, Singapore and Vietnam. Their dishes were really good. Next time I want to visit Turkey. Many friends praised its dishes. I want to try it watching nice views.
Hello!
I'm Shiera.
I'm new here.
I'm an office worker.
I like watching movies.
I hope I can help you to learn Japanese and you can help me to learn English.
Thank you and best regards.
Nov. 7, 2019
Thank you !
Introduceing myself
Hello!
I'm Shiera.
I'm new here.
I'm an office worker.
My dream is to travel all ofaround the world to enjoy local dishes.
(Sounds more natural like this)
I like watching movies.
I want to watch movies without Japanese subtitles.
I hope I can help you to learn Japanese and you can help me to learn English.
Thank you and best regards.
Feedback
Nice to meet you, Shiera! :) Great job on your post. (Your English is very solid, so I only made small suggestions.) I am also new to langcorrect, but I think it will be very helpful. がんばりましょう! :)
Nov. 7, 2019
Nice to meet you, Gin-san! Thank you for the correction. Actually, how to judge if it's singular or plural is difficult for me. I can't remember which noun is countable or uncountable.
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