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genderqueermangon

Jan. 19, 2020

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Intro!

¡Hola!
Me llamo es Paloma.
Soy cubana y soy de la yuma (estados unidos), pero no hablo español.
¡Quiero hablar español!
Estudio mucho.
¡Soy queer, y soy nonbinario!
Tengo ocho gatos 😂 y ellos estan bueno y bonito.
¡Gracias, y tienes buenas dias!


Hello!
My name is Paloma.
I'm cuban and I'm from the united states, but I don't speak spanish. I want to speak spanish! I study a lot.
I'm queer and nonbinary! I have eight cats 😂 and they are good and beautiful.
Thank you and have a good day!

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¡Intro!

Exclamation points and question marks in Spanish are always used in the beginning as well.

¡Hola!

Me llamo es Paloma.

Technically, "My name is Paloma" is literary translated by "Mi nombre es Paloma", but you can also say "Me llamo Paloma".

Soy cubana y soy de la yYuma (eEstados uUnidos), pero no hablo español.

Yuma should have the first letter in capitals, as is the name of a place, same goes for US.

¡Quiero hablar español!

Estudio mucho.

¡Soy queer, y soy nonno binario!

You don't need to put the verb twice since here it's the same in a very shot sentence. Also, nonbinary doesn't have a "formal and accepted" way of saying it, but the one that I've seen the most is just "no binario".

Tengo ocho gatos 😂 y ellos estason buenos y bonitopreciosos.

To be in Spanish can be translated by "ser" or "estar". At the beginning it'll be a little complicated to know when to use which, but you'll get there.

Beautiful can be "bonito", but in this case, to make it sound a little bit better, I think is better to put "preciosos"

¡Gracias, y tienes buenas diasque tengáis un buen día!

Depending of the variety of Spanish that you're working with, this translation is also accepted: "¡Gracias, y que tengan un buen día!"

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genderqueermangon

Jan. 20, 2020

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Thank you tons! I really appreciate your explanations and corrections💓

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Jack_MN

Feb. 25, 2020

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As a heritage speaker, do you have a lot of opportunities within your community to practice Spanish?

¡Soy queer, y soy nonbinario!


¡Soy queer, y soy nonno binario!

You don't need to put the verb twice since here it's the same in a very shot sentence. Also, nonbinary doesn't have a "formal and accepted" way of saying it, but the one that I've seen the most is just "no binario".

Intro!


¡Intro!

Exclamation points and question marks in Spanish are always used in the beginning as well.

¡Hola!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Me llamo es Paloma.


Me llamo es Paloma.

Technically, "My name is Paloma" is literary translated by "Mi nombre es Paloma", but you can also say "Me llamo Paloma".

Soy cubana y soy de la yuma (estados unidos), pero no hablo español.


Soy cubana y soy de la yYuma (eEstados uUnidos), pero no hablo español.

Yuma should have the first letter in capitals, as is the name of a place, same goes for US.

¡Quiero hablar español!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Estudio mucho.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tengo ocho gatos 😂 y ellos estan bueno y bonito.


Tengo ocho gatos 😂 y ellos estason buenos y bonitopreciosos.

To be in Spanish can be translated by "ser" or "estar". At the beginning it'll be a little complicated to know when to use which, but you'll get there. Beautiful can be "bonito", but in this case, to make it sound a little bit better, I think is better to put "preciosos"

¡Gracias, y tienes buenas dias!


¡Gracias, y tienes buenas diasque tengáis un buen día!

Depending of the variety of Spanish that you're working with, this translation is also accepted: "¡Gracias, y que tengan un buen día!"

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