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alexwong2164

Oct. 24, 2020

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Interstellar 2014-2020

After long 6 years!

Finally I can watch this movie with my full concentration.

That kind of movie is just too difficult to understand.

But also too “beautiful” to watch 3 or even 4 times.

Story, BGM, CGI…I give 1,000 points, if 100 is the maximum.

So, happy to watch again.

Even the second time watch this movie.

I still able to cried because what happen to protagonist.


However, one plot (just one) makes me say “this is not a good movie!”

That is “save the world, mankind…!

I think that is completely unnecessary.

Anyway, this is a truly masterpiece level of movie.

Corrections

After long 6 years!, I can finally concentrate fully on this movie.

I combined this with the second sentence for grammatical reasons.

Thatis kind of movie is just too difficult to understand.

But it is also too beautiful to watch 3three or even 4four times.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but I'm not quite sure what you mean...

Story, BGM, CGI…I give 1,000 points, if 100 is the maximum.

Not sure I understand what you mean here.

So,Because of this, I am happy to watch the movie again.

Even the second time watch this moviI would even watch it a second time.

I still able to cried becausecried when I saw what happened to the protagonist.

However, one part of the plot (just one) makesde me saythink,tThis is not a good movie!”

That is “saveI'm talking about the idea of saving the world, and mankind…!.

I think that ipart was completely unnecessary.

Anyway, this movie is a truly a masterpiece level of movie.

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There were a couple things you wrote that I didn't fully understand, but overall, this looked good! I like the movie, too. Have you read the short story it's based on? I hope my comments were helpful.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 25, 2020

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Short story?

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Aviva

Oct. 25, 2020

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Yes, the movie is based on the novella "Story of Your Life" by Ted Chiang.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 25, 2020

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A film adaptation of the story by Eric Heisserer, titled Arrival.

After long 6 years!


After long 6 years!, I can finally concentrate fully on this movie.

I combined this with the second sentence for grammatical reasons.

Finally I can watch this movie with my full concentration.


Interstellar 2014-2020


That kind of movie is just too difficult to understand.


Thatis kind of movie is just too difficult to understand.

But also too “beautiful” to watch 3 or even 4 times.


But it is also too beautiful to watch 3three or even 4four times.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but I'm not quite sure what you mean...

Story, BGM, CGI…I give 1,000 points, if 100 is the maximum.


Story, BGM, CGI…I give 1,000 points, if 100 is the maximum.

Not sure I understand what you mean here.

So, happy to watch again.


So,Because of this, I am happy to watch the movie again.

Even the second time watch this movie.


Even the second time watch this moviI would even watch it a second time.

I still able to cried because what happen to protagonist.


I still able to cried becausecried when I saw what happened to the protagonist.

However, one plot (just one) makes me say “this is not a good movie!”


However, one part of the plot (just one) makesde me saythink,tThis is not a good movie!”

That is “save the world, mankind…!


That is “saveI'm talking about the idea of saving the world, and mankind…!.

I think that is completely unnecessary.


I think that ipart was completely unnecessary.

Anyway, this is a truly masterpiece level of movie.


Anyway, this movie is a truly a masterpiece level of movie.

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