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ricky

Dec. 23, 2020

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I think it was several months ago. I went to a company specialized in mountain bikes, and it is an import and export company. I needed to do my internship in some big companies because of my application for my masters degree, so I needed to perfect my CV. On the first day, I had my interview with this company. At that moment I had butterflies in my stomach, and I tried to chill out to leave a good impression on my boss. Fortunately, I made it. I felt I was on cloud nine at that time. But I did not know how hard this demanding job was. I was asked to participate in Gonton fair, the biggest import and export exhibition in China, to be a hostess in a live streaming show. The problem is I am a layman of mountain bike, so how can I introduce some products even though I don’t know either to others. Besides, this is the first time I have spoke English in public and to be a hostess. I was under pressure. Anyway, I accepted this job and I worked closely with my colleagues. After I finished, I felt that I gained a lot. First, I felt a sense of fulfillment since I tried something new and learned something new about mountain bikes which attracted me. Second, I built my confidence, because this job provided me with an opportunities to show myself in front of thousands of people. Most importantly, I became a good team player and I had experience of working in a stimulating working environment

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I went to an import and export company specializeding in mountain bikes, and it is an import and export company.

I needed to do my internship in some big companies because of my application for my masters degree, so I needwanted to perfect my CV.

On the first day, I had myI managed to get an interview with this company.

At that moment I had butterflies in my stomach, and I tried to chill outrelax in order to leave a good impression on my boss.

I felt like I was on cloud nine at that time.

But I did not know how hard this demanding this job was.

I was asked to participate in Gonton fair, the biggest import and export exhibition in China, to beas a hostess in a live streaming show.

The problem is I am a layman when it comes tof mountain bikes, so how can Iit would be hard to introduce some products even though I don’t know either to othersthat I didn't even know about.

Besides, this is the first time I have spoked to speak English in public and to be a hostess.

I was under pressure.

Anyway, I accepted this job and I worked closely with my colleagues.

After I finished, I felt that I gained a lot.

Second, I built my confidence, because this job provided me with an opportunities to show myself in front of thousands of people.

Most importantly, I became a good team player and I hadgot experience of working in a stimulating working environment

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Wow, that sounds like an amazing internship!

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ricky

Dec. 24, 2020

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Thank you for your help~ yes, it is ~

Internship


I think it was several months ago.


I went to a company specialized in mountain bikes, and it is an import and export company.


I went to an import and export company specializeding in mountain bikes, and it is an import and export company.

I needed to do my internship in some big companies because of my application for my masters degree, so I needed to perfect my CV.


I needed to do my internship in some big companies because of my application for my masters degree, so I needwanted to perfect my CV.

On the first day, I had my interview with this company.


On the first day, I had myI managed to get an interview with this company.

At that moment I had butterflies in my stomach, and I tried to chill out to leave a good impression on my boss.


At that moment I had butterflies in my stomach, and I tried to chill outrelax in order to leave a good impression on my boss.

Fortunately, I made it.


I felt I was on cloud nine at that time.


I felt like I was on cloud nine at that time.

But I did not know how hard this demanding job was.


But I did not know how hard this demanding this job was.

I was asked to participate in Gonton fair, the biggest import and export exhibition in China, to be a hostess in a live streaming show.


I was asked to participate in Gonton fair, the biggest import and export exhibition in China, to beas a hostess in a live streaming show.

The problem is I am a layman of mountain bike, so how can I introduce some products even though I don’t know either to others.


The problem is I am a layman when it comes tof mountain bikes, so how can Iit would be hard to introduce some products even though I don’t know either to othersthat I didn't even know about.

Besides, this is the first time I have spoke English in public and to be a hostess.


Besides, this is the first time I have spoked to speak English in public and to be a hostess.

I was under pressure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyway, I accepted this job and I worked closely with my colleagues.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After I finished, I felt that I gained a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First, I felt a sense of fulfillment since I tried something new and learned something new about mountain bikes which attracted me.


Second, I built my confidence, because this job provided me with an opportunities to show myself in front of thousands of people.


Second, I built my confidence, because this job provided me with an opportunities to show myself in front of thousands of people.

Most importantly, I became a good team player and I had experience of working in a stimulating working environment


Most importantly, I became a good team player and I hadgot experience of working in a stimulating working environment

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