Nov. 9, 2022
Internet and potional risk
nowadays, the internet has been widely used and brought convenience to our lives. We can't do many things without it. However, it is necessary for us to pay attention on the side effects of internet.
Generally, there are two main nagetive acpects of the internet. First of all, many people are addicted to it, which badly spoiled their health and lives. What's more, the access of information make many people can't attracted on their work.
In addition, there are mant ways to relax on the internet, which are various and interisting. but when we abuse it, it will also harmful to our mind.
In one word, we require learning to control our time online and embrace our real life, which can really satisfied us.
Internet and potionits potential risks
nNowadays, the iInternet has beenis widely used and. It has brought convenience to our lives.
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Generally, there are two main nageegative acspects of the iInternet.
First of all, many people are addicted to it, which badly spoileddamages their health and lives.
What's more, the access of information makeeans that many people can't attractare unable to be focused on their work.
In addition, there are mant ways to relax on the internet, which are various and interistingvarious interesting ways to relax/pass time on the Internet.
butHowever, when we abuse it, it will also harmful to our minthem, negative side effects will be produced.
In one word, we require learning to control our timea nutshell, we need to learn to manage the amount of time we spend online and embrace our real lifeves, which can reallyalso bring us satisfied usaction.
Internet and potionits Potential rRisks
nNowadays, the internet hais beening widely used and has brought convenience to our lives.
We can't do many things without it.
However, it is necessary for us to pay attention on theto its side effects of internet.
In my opinion, it's more natural to say: "WE NEED TO / WE MUST pay attention..."
Generally, there are two main nageegative acspects of the internet.
First of all, many people are addicted to it, which badly spoiledaffects their health and lives.
What's more, the access of information makes many people can't attractedhave a hard time focusing on their work.
In addition, there are manty ways to relax on the internet, which are various and interiesting.
"various" is kind of redundant since you already used the word "many." You can instead say "there are many DIFFERENT ways to relax..."
but when we abuse it, it will also be harmful to our mind.
In one wshordt, we requireneed to learning how to control our time online so we cand embrace our real lifeves, which can reallybe so much more satisfied usying.
you could also say "fulfilling" instead of satisfying
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nowadays, the internet has been widely used and brought convenience to our lives.
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We can't do many things without it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, it is necessary for us to pay attention on the side effects of internet. However, it is necessary for us to pay attention In my opinion, it's more natural to say: "WE NEED TO / WE MUST pay attention..." However, it is necessary for us to pay attention to |
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Generally, there are two main nagetive acpects of the internet. Generally, there are two main n Generally, there are two main n |
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First of all, many people are addicted to it, which badly spoils their health and lives. |
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What's more, the access of information make many people can't attracted on their work. What's more, the access of information makes many people What's more, the access of information m |
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In addition, there are mant ways to relax on the internet, which are various and interisting. In addition, there are man "various" is kind of redundant since you already used the word "many." You can instead say "there are many DIFFERENT ways to relax..." In addition, there are |
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but when we abuse it, it will also harmful to our mind. but when we abuse it, it will also be harmful to our mind.
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In one word, we need to learn to control our time online and embrace our real life, which can really satisfied us. |
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First of all, many people are addicted to it, which badly spoiled their health and lives. First of all, many people are addicted to it, which badly First |
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In one word, we require learning to control our time online and embrace our real life, which can really satisfied us. In you could also say "fulfilling" instead of satisfying In |
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