Aug. 4, 2020
Intelligent could be a gift or poison.
"Intelligent could be a gift or poison depending on the person" this is a new idea of me after I was inspired by my friends. Some have a clever brain when they're born, some is shaping by the situation. I'm the second one. That doesn't mean which is best. But in my opinion, the first is fatal when people don't have enough self-knowledge. For an example of my result, look no further than my friends, which rest of them are millennials. Honestly, I accept that they are smarter than me. Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audient because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views. My life experience took a lesson to me that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship.
this is the second paragraph of the reflection. Hoping you could get me feedback and suggestion for my writing. thank you very much.
Intelligent cce Could be a gGift or pa Poison.
Intelligence is a noun, intelligent is an adjective
Capitalize the important words in a title
"Intelligentce could be a gift or poisonblessing or a curse depending on the person." this is a new idea of meI had this idea after I was inspired by my friends.
same as before
A blessing or a curse is a common phrase in English that means the same thing as gift or poison.
Some have a clever brain when they're born, some is shaping by the situationare smart from the day they're born, some become smart.
another common english phrase that describes this idea is "nature versus nurture."
I'm the second one.
That doesn't mean whichone is bestter.
I can't explain why, but this doesn't feel right
But in my opinion, the first is fatal when people don't have enough self-knowledge.
For an example of my result, look no further than my friends, which rest of them areo are all millennials.
use who when talking about people
Use all since they all fall into the same category
Honestly, I accept that they are smarter than me.
Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audientce because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views.
My life experience took aaught me the lesson to me that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship.
taught me the lesson that
put indirect object before direct object, use the verb taught.
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Interesting advice and good work!
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Intelligent could be a gift or poison. Intelligen Intelligence is a noun, intelligent is an adjective Capitalize the important words in a title |
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"Intelligent could be a gift or poison depending on the person" this is a new idea of me after I was inspired by my friends. "Intelligen same as before A blessing or a curse is a common phrase in English that means the same thing as gift or poison. |
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Some have a clever brain when they're born, some is shaping by the situation. Some another common english phrase that describes this idea is "nature versus nurture." |
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I'm the second one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That doesn't mean which is best. That doesn't mean I can't explain why, but this doesn't feel right |
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But in my opinion, the first is fatal when people don't have enough self-knowledge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For an example of my result, look no further than my friends, which rest of them are millennials. For an example use who when talking about people Use all since they all fall into the same category |
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Honestly, I accept that they are smarter than me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audient because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views. Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audien |
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My life experience took a lesson to me that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship. My life experience t taught me the lesson that put indirect object before direct object, use the verb taught. |
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