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I applied for broadband service at a China Unicom center last noon. The engineer finished installing it for me around 7 p.m.
It was about half an hour later than my appointment time. However, it was understandable, as the engineers were extremely busy on weekends, and the engineer had informed me in advance that it would be late due to a minor issue with his last client.
Install Broadband for My New Apartment
I applied for broadband service at a China Unicom center lasyesterday at noon (?).
The engineer finished installing it for me around 7 p.m.
It was about half an hour later than my appointment time.
However, it was understandable, as the engineers were extremely busy on weekends, and the engineer had informed me in advance that it would be late due to a minor issue with his last client.
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Great job! The only trouble is "last noon", which is something we don't say. I'm guessing you mean yesterday at noon, although really, unless you need to specify that it was right at 12:00 PM on the dot, it would be more common to say, "yesterday afternoon" or "yesterday around noon."
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I applied for broadband service at a China Unicom center last noon. I applied for broadband service at a China Unicom center |
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The engineer finished installing it for me around 7 p.m. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was about half an hour later than my appointment time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, it was understandable, as the engineers were extremely busy on weekends, and the engineer had informed me in advance that it would be late due to a minor issue with his last client. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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