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I'd appreciate it if you could correct my email to be polite. I'm going to ask the company in Ukraine about the availability of their products.
Subjects: Availability of your products
Dear Sir,
My name is Tommy, living in Japan. I'm so interested in your elaborate products and would like to buy one. However, your country is in the middle of volatile situation so that I'm not sure if my order would be acceptable now. Even if you could send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived in Japan without delay.
More than anything, I really worried about your own situation. If nothing happens to your country in the next few weeks, can I confirm availability again? I sincerely hope you and your family are all safe.
I terribly sorry to send e-mail under severe circumstances. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Tommy

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Subjects: Availability of yYour pProducts

Dear SirTo Whom it May Concern,

My name is Tommy, livingand I live in Japan.

I'm so am very interested in your elaborate products and would like to buypurchase one.

However, your country is in the middle of volatile situation so that I'm not sure if my order would be acceptable now.I am not sure if my order would be acceptable now, given that your country is in the middle of volatile situation.

Even if you couldit is possible to send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived in Japan without delay.

More than anything, I really worriedy about your ownthe current situation.

If nothing happens to your country in the next few weeks, canmay I confirm the product availability again?

I am terribly sorry to send an e-mail under severthese circumstances.

I'd appreciate it if you could correct my email to be polite.

I'm going to ask theis company in Ukraine about the availability of their products.

Subjects: Availability of your products

Dear SirTo Whom it May Concern,

When writing business correspondence, if you don't know the gender of the person you are addressing, it is polite to start your letter/email with "To Whom it May Concern,"

My name is Tommy, and I livinge in Japan.

I'm sovery interested in your elaborate products and would like to buy one.

However, since your country is in the middle of volatilea pressing situation so that, I'm not sure if my order would be acceptable right now.

EAnd even if you couldan send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived insend it to Japan without delay.

More than anything, I really worried about your own situation.

If nothing happens to your country the current situation betters within the next few weeks, canmay I confirm availability again?

I sincerely hope you and your family are all safe.

I am terribly sorry to send this e-mail under severeuch strenuous circumstances.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Tommy

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I made some changes to make the email sound more polite and natural. I hope everything turns out okay.

I'd appreciate it if you could correct my email to be polite.

I'm going to ask the company in Ukraine about the availability of their products.

Subjects: Availability of your products

Dear Sir,

My name is Tommy, and I livinge in Japan.

I'm so interested in your elaborate products and would like to buy one.

However, your countryUkraine is in the middle of a volatile situation so thatand I'm unot sure if my order would be acceptapossible now.

Even if you could send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived in Japan without delayit were possible to make a shipment, I'm concerned that there could be a delay in its arrival to Japan.

More than anything, I really worried about your own situationAbove all, I hope that the situation in Ukraine improves.

If nothing happens to your country in the next few weeks, can ICould you please confirm the availability againd possibility to ship to Japan?

I sincerely hope you and your family are all safe.

I'm terribly sorry to have to send an e-mail under such severe circumstances.

I would omit this sentence in the correspondence

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Tommy

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Dear Sir,


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Dear SirTo Whom it May Concern,

When writing business correspondence, if you don't know the gender of the person you are addressing, it is polite to start your letter/email with "To Whom it May Concern,"

Dear SirTo Whom it May Concern,

My name is Tommy, living in Japan.


My name is Tommy, and I livinge in Japan.

My name is Tommy, and I livinge in Japan.

My name is Tommy, livingand I live in Japan.

I'm so interested in your elaborate products and would like to buy one.


I'm so interested in your elaborate products and would like to buy one.

I'm sovery interested in your elaborate products and would like to buy one.

I'm so am very interested in your elaborate products and would like to buypurchase one.

However, your country is in the middle of volatile situation so that I'm not sure if my order would be acceptable now.


However, your countryUkraine is in the middle of a volatile situation so thatand I'm unot sure if my order would be acceptapossible now.

However, since your country is in the middle of volatilea pressing situation so that, I'm not sure if my order would be acceptable right now.

However, your country is in the middle of volatile situation so that I'm not sure if my order would be acceptable now.I am not sure if my order would be acceptable now, given that your country is in the middle of volatile situation.

Even if you could send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived in Japan without delay.


Even if you could send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived in Japan without delayit were possible to make a shipment, I'm concerned that there could be a delay in its arrival to Japan.

EAnd even if you couldan send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived insend it to Japan without delay.

Even if you couldit is possible to send the item, it might be difficult to be arrived in Japan without delay.

More than anything, I really worried about your own situation.


More than anything, I really worried about your own situationAbove all, I hope that the situation in Ukraine improves.

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More than anything, I really worriedy about your ownthe current situation.

If nothing happens to your country in the next few weeks, can I confirm availability again?


If nothing happens to your country in the next few weeks, can ICould you please confirm the availability againd possibility to ship to Japan?

If nothing happens to your country the current situation betters within the next few weeks, canmay I confirm availability again?

If nothing happens to your country in the next few weeks, canmay I confirm the product availability again?

I sincerely hope you and your family are all safe.


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I terribly sorry to send e-mail under severe circumstances.


I'm terribly sorry to have to send an e-mail under such severe circumstances.

I would omit this sentence in the correspondence

I am terribly sorry to send this e-mail under severeuch strenuous circumstances.

I am terribly sorry to send an e-mail under severthese circumstances.

I look forward to hearing from you.


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Best regards,


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Tommy


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