Jan. 24, 2020
Injured US Soldiers Increase to 34 from Iranian Missile Strike
The Pentagon’s chief spokesman Jonathan Hoffman told the reporters at the press conference on the 24th that 34 service members in serving in Iraq have suffered injury from the Iranian missile attack earlier this month. All injuries included symptoms of concussions caused by the impact of the attacks. Eight of the 34 were transported to the U.S. Initially, the U.S. government officials announced that there were no casualties from the attack, however, on the 16th, revised the number to eleven.
According to Hoffman, nine members are undergoing treatment at a hospital in Germany, and seventeen have gone back on duty in Iraq. Iran launched ballistic missiles on the 8th on Ain Assad Airbase located in Al Anbar governorate in mid-west of Iraq. On the 24th, the U.S. secretary of defense Mark Esper ordered a more efficient and rapid delivery of information related to casualties of U.S. troops.
At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump told, “I heard that they had headaches and a couple of other things, but I would say and I can report it is not very serious.”
Based on the report of zero casualties, President Trump held back retaliatory measures against Iran. Intending to prevent further conflict between Iran, President explained that the situation is not serious.
米兵負傷者34人に増加、イランによる空爆で
米国防総省のホフマン報道官は24日の記者会見で、1月上旬に起きたイランによるイラク駐留米軍に対する空爆で米兵34人が負傷したと明らかにした。いずれも空爆の衝撃による脳振盪(しんとう)の症状があり8人は米国に移送された。米政権は当初、死傷者はゼロと説明し、16日に11人が負傷したと修正していた。
ホフマン氏によると、9人がドイツで治療を続け、17人はイラクでの任務を再開した。イランは8日、イラク中西部アンバル州のアルアサド空軍基地を弾道ミサイルで攻撃していた。エスパー国防長官は24日、米兵の死傷者に関する情報などが迅速に報告されるよう手続きの検証を指示した。
トランプ氏は22日の記者会見で米兵の負傷者に関して「頭痛の症状を訴えたと聞いた。そんなに深刻なことではない」と語った。トランプ氏は死傷者がゼロとの報告を踏まえてイランに対する報復攻撃を見送った。事態を深刻でないと説明し、イランとのさらなる対立を避ける狙いがあったとみられる。
The Pentagon’s chief spokesman Jonathan Hoffman told the reporters at the press conference on the 24th that 34 service members in serving in Iraq have suffered injury from the Iranian missile attack earlier this month.
At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump tolsaid, “I heard that they had headaches and a couple of other things, but I would say and I can report it is not very serious.”
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Based on the report of zero casualties, President Trump held back retaliatory measures against Iran. Intending to prevent further conflict between Iran, President explained that the situation is not serious.
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Injured US Soldiers Increase to 34 from Iranian Missile Stri
Injured US Soldiers Increase to 34 from Iranian Missile Strike
The Pentagon’s chief spokesman, Jonathan Hoffman, told the reporters at the/a press conference on the 24th that 34 service members in serving in Iraq have suffered injury from the Iranian missile attack earlier this month.
You should use commas around a name when introducing someone - , Jonathan Hoffman,
the/a press conference - this sounds like a news article, so if this press conference had already been introduced, "the" works well. If it is being introduced for the first time, "a" works better.
All injuries included symptoms of concussions caused by the impact of the attacks.
On the 24th, the U.
S. secretary of defense Mark Esper ordered a more efficient and rapid delivery of information related to casualties of U.
S. troops.
At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump told reporters, “I heard that they had headaches and a couple of other things, but I would say and I can report it is not very serious.”
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Based on the report of zero casualties, President Trump held back retaliatory measures against Iran. Intending to prevent further conflict between Iran, President explained that the situation is not serious.
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"told" should be used with the person who is receiving the information, which is why I added "reporters." You could also say "Trump said.."
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At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump told, “I heard that they had headaches and a couple of other things, but I would say and I can report it is not very serious.” Based on the report of zero casualties, President Trump held back retaliatory measures against Iran. Intending to prevent further conflict between Iran, President explained that the situation is not serious. At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump told reporters, “I heard that they had headaches and a couple of other things, but I would say and I can report it is not very serious.” At a press conference conducted on the 22nd, President Trump |
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