April 27, 2023
Informal Email5
Hi Sans,
How are you doing? I hope you are having a good day. Just wanted to drop you a quick email to catch up. By the way, have you received the last football club notification? I can't believe it will be shut down next week. It makes me really sad; I have been a member of this club since I was a child. The thing is that the club cannot be sustained any longer due to the COVID-19 restrictions. I think the club membership fee should be put up, don't you think? I'd like to hear your thoughts about it. Well, I don't keep you any longer. Thanks for reading and I can't wait to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Sergio
Informal Email 5
Hi Sans,
How are you doing?
I hope you are having a good day.
Just wanted to drop you a quick email to catch up.
By the way, have you received the last football (club) notification?
I can't believe it will be shut down next week.
It makes me really sad; I have been a member of this club since I was a child.
The thing is that the club cannot be sustained any longer due to the COVID-19 restrictions.
I think the club membership fee should be put upraised, don't you think?
or
I think the club membership fee should be made higher, don't you think?
I'd like to hear your thoughts about it.
Well, I don't want to keep you any longer.
Thanks for reading and I can't wait to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Sergio
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Hi Sans,
How are you doing?
I hope you are having a good day.
Just wanted to drop you a quick email to catch up.
By the way, hHave you received the latest football club notification?
"by the way" is used when you change topics in a conversation or add a side note. Here it is the main idea of the email so it's not necessary
I can't believe it will be shut down next week.
It makes me really sad; I have been a member of this club since I was a child.
The thing is that the club cannot be sustained any longer due to the COVID-19 restrictions.
Instead of shutting down, I think the club membership fee shcould be put upincreased, don't you think?
I'd like to hear your thoughts about it.
Well, I dwon't keep you any longer.
Thanks for reading and I can't wait to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
"regards" is often for formal emails
Sergio
April 27, 2023
Thanks!
April 27, 2023
Instead of shutting down, I think the club membership fee shcould be put upincreased, don't you think?
Why would it not be correct to use the phrasal verb "put up"?
May 2, 2023
Why would it not be correct to use the phrasal verb "put up"?
to "put up" is normally used to talk about physically raising something OR constructing something.
For example:
She put up her hair in a ponytail
OR
He put up a fence in his backyard
Here, in your example, you are talking about an increase in price - in this case, "put up" cannot be used (although the meaning will be understood)
Informal Email5
By the way, have you received the lasrecent football club notification?
I think the club membership fee should be put upincreased, don't you think?
Well, I dwon't keep you any longer.
April 27, 2023
Thanks a million!
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