April 25, 2023
Informal Email 4
Hi Perez,
How's it going? I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time. I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off? I'm so annoyed about it. I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you? Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day.
Best wishes,
Sergio
Informal Email 4
Hi, Perez,
How's it going?
I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time.
I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?
I'm so annoyed about it.
I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you?
or, more naturally in the US,
I think they should postpone it instead of canceling it, don't you?
Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day tomorrow.
Best wishes,
Sergio
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Good work!
Informal Email 4
Hi Perez,
How's it going?
This tends to be used more in speech, it would be better to say "How are you doing?"
I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time.
I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?
I'm so annoyed about it.
I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you?
Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day.
I would scrap this setence as you would say this to someone rather than in an email
Best wishes,
Sergio
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Great writing! :)
April 25, 2023
Many thanks :DD
I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?
The usage of "OK" is a bit negative in American culture. Usually you want to use "doing well"
I think they should put it offn instead of canceling it, don't you?
Not sure what you mean here. Do you want to have the party? If so, you should "put it on."
April 25, 2023
I think they should put it offn instead of canceling it, don't you?
Hello, thank you for your corrections. I thought "put something off" meant the same as "postpone".
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